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Desperate Beagle

In the North Sky on Saturday Night

It's fine weather today and there is no cloud in the sky even at nighttime. Thirty minutes ago, I was going to buy some yakitori to-go at a near-by supermarket. On my way, I thought I saw a UFO in the north sky. But instantly, I was ...
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