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Hello!
【self-introduction】
I'm a Game programmer at KOEI corporation. I've been involved in Online Game Project such as "Romance of the Three Kingdoms Online", "Dynasty Worriors Online".

I study English to communicate with a lot of people over the world.
Indeed, at my work place, there are many English natives. So, when we proceed our task, being able to use English make the project smoothly!

【current challenge】
Now I try some English-related tests such as EIKEN (http://stepeiken.org/)
TOEFL(http://www.ets.org/)
GMAT(http://www.mba.com)
and so on.
In this exam, we need to make an English Composition about various kinds of TOPICS.
So I'm going to write English Compositions in Lang-8.
I'd appreciated it if you correct my mistakes in my English compositions!


I want your help!
If there are incorrect spellings or grammatical manners in my English compositions,
please be frank with me and I'd appreciated it if you correct them.

Ofcourse if you need some helps in your Japanese composition, I would be happy to help you!

Thanks.

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尽管我是日本人,日本差不多的大城市我都去过。 With native lang

尽管我是日本人,日本差不多的大城市我都去过。 名古屋、大阪、等等。 中国朋友却访问了各个地方的日本。 放了暑假,我打算访问各个地方啊!
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Jul 4, 2019 12:56
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很多人到底为什么吵架? With native lang

很多人到底为什么吵架? 我们应该努力互相尊重,为了不分手吧。 咱们沟通使用共同语言吧!
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Jul 3, 2019 13:22
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今天我两个小时参加会议。 With native lang

今天我两个小时参加会议。 虽然它会议很长,但是我们都带一杯的塑料瓶里的茶。 日本的录茶很苦的。 我听到了中国里的录茶很甜。 它是真的吗?
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Jul 1, 2019 14:58
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我一周五天打九点工。 With native lang

我一周五天打九点工。 我一日五个小时睡觉。 我一个小时读书去过公司。
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Jun 27, 2019 14:02
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虽然很突然,怎么种食物您爱好的? With native lang

虽然很突然,怎么种食物您爱好的? 世上有很多的食物,比如汉堡包,冰激凌,古老肉等等。 顺便说一下,我喜欢比萨饼。 比萨饼由奶酪,面包面团,肉,和菜。
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Jun 19, 2019 16:28
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