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  • Emaciate-----(When his lover leaves him, he emaciated.)
  • Emaciate-----(When his lover leaves him, he is emaciated.)
  • To be emaciated means that someone is very thin or weak, usually because they haven't eaten food.
To be emaciated means that someone is very thin or weak, usually because they haven't eaten food.
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  • Fasting----(A graet many people still sit on the avenue to express their unsatisfied of Government and keep fasting.)
  • Fasting----(A great many people still sit on the avenue to express their dissatisfaction with the Government and keep fasting.)
  • Fasting is more related to going without something deemed important or necessary, like food or sleep. This is often done in protest or in order to gain some religious goal or experience.
Fasting is more related to going without something deemed important or necessary, like food or sleep. This is often done in protest or in order to gain some religious goal or experience.
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  • Elaborate-----(I elaborated a gift for my grandchild.)
  • Elaborate-----(I elaborated a gift for my grandchild.)I meticulously/carefully prepared a gift for my grandchild.
  • Elaborate 有两个用法,其中一个就是作形容词,'this is an elaborate gift' (这份礼物很精致), 另外的一个是作副词,'he prepared a gift elaborately' (精心準備了一份禮物)。你用的‘elaborate’作动词,事实上,这样的用法是另外的一个词,定义为‘说明’。 Elaborate has two usages, one of them is as an adjective, 'this is an elaborate gift'; the other is as an adverb, 'he prepared a gift elaborately'. The way you used 'elaborate' is as a verb, this sort of usage is actually another word which can be defined as 'to explain'.
Elaborate 有两个用法,其中一个就是作形容词,'this is an elaborate gift' (这份礼物很精致), 另外的一个是作副词,'he prepared a gift elaborately' (精心準備了一份禮物)。你用的‘elaborate’作动词,事实上,这样的用法是另外的一个词,定义为‘说明’。

Elaborate has two usages, one of them is as an adjective, 'this is an elaborate gift'; the other is as an adverb, 'he prepared a gift elaborately'. The way you used 'elaborate' is as a verb, this sort of usage is actually another word which can be defined as 'to explain'.
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  • Before I arrived at Egypt, a little bird tell me that if I visit Egypt, I'd better to bring some ball-point pen.
  • Before arriving in Egypt, a little bird told me that if I visit Egypt, it would be good to bring some ball-point pens.
  • NOTE: The phrase "a little bird told me" is possible, but it sounds condescending. A recommend a phrase such as "an acquaintance told me" or "I read in a travel guide."
NOTE: The phrase "a little bird told me" is possible, but it sounds condescending. A recommend a phrase such as "an acquaintance told me" or "I read in a travel guide."

May 26, 2017 19:09 Public Aswan (Egypt)
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  • I work for a simple job every single day.
  • OPTION A - If you work 7 days a week : I do simple work every (single) day.OPTION B - If you work 5 or 6 days a week: My job consists of simple work.

May 4, 2017 23:10 Public Somthing Nagative
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  • When I noticed that you have already met a fiance, except astonished that I thought, also I want to make a bless to you.
  • When I heard that you have engaged to marry, I was somewhat surprised at first. However, I am writing to wish you and your future wife the best.
  • CULTURE POINT: Usually only special people such as priests, saints, great yogis, or mystic shamen have the power to "bless" other people . . . ordinary people have the power to wish the best for others - but not to bless them.
CULTURE POINT: Usually only special people such as priests, saints, great yogis, or mystic shamen have the power to "bless" other people . . . ordinary people have the power to wish the best for others - but not to bless them.
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  • I apologize to disturb you for a long time.
  • SUGGESTION: To create a more positive tone, I recommend this wording - A long time has passed, and I hope you are well.
  • (If you apologize, the memory of some bad experience might reawaken . . . it is wise to let bad memories sleep and start with more positive new experiences.)
(If you apologize, the memory of some bad experience might reawaken . . . it is wise to let bad memories sleep and start with more positive new experiences.)
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  • Dear Vince
  • Dear Vince,
  • NOTE: Add a comma to the salutation of personal letters. (Business letters use a colon.)
Add a comma to the salutation of personal letters. (Business letters use a colon.)
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  • Practice to Write Down somthing (Just Practice)
  • In MLA Style - A Practice Letter to a Friend
In MLA Style - A Practice Letter to a Friend
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  • Because something bother me, I feel very sadness.
  • OPTION A: Moreover, something is bothering me: I feel very sad.OPTION B: In addition, something in my heart feels heavy: I am very sad.

Apr 9, 2017 12:36 Public Sorry Guys

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