If there are some weird sentences here please tell me....

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May 30, 2011 17:34
This evening I was sitting on a chair at a neat lobby. I was correcting your entries and editing my bicycle blog after going back from Kobe.

As you may know I have been writing my bicycle blog. I have uploaded a promotional entry . Here is the link;http://mamabicycle.blogspot.com/

Well if there are some weird sentences on the entry would you mind to tell me what is weird... I will appreciate what you will point out. Well you need not to answer the questions on the transit order formats....

Thank you...