Writing Task 3 by Ayano

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Dec 16, 2015 23:47
Writing Task 3

• Using between 80-100 words, write your opinion about the following topic. Give two reasons to support your answer.
• You can use the three points below as reference. However, you may also write from the points of view other than these.

TOPIC
These days, some people buy things on the Internet. Do you think more people will do so in the future?

POINTS
・Cost
・Safety
・Technology

↓↓↓ This is a student's answer, please correct it below. You need only correct it.I would be glad if you could add some comments of encouragement.




Internet is very useful.
But it is dangerous in safety.
I think that usable in peace increase recently, if I can improve it.
Because personal information is often washed away.