Writing a diary with iPad → Writing a diary with an iPad
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I have bought an iPad and a mobile internet router.
It is very useful to write journals in anywhere!
→It is very useful to write journals anywhere!
In the train to the office, I usually have an spare time, and I have wanted to use the Internet, because is I can use the Internet, I can do a lot of things.
→On the train to the office, I usually have an spare time, and I have wanted to use the Internet. If I can use the Internet, I can do a lot of things.
I usually watch video podcasts in trains, or read books.
→I usually watch video podcasts or read books on trains.
Now I can write journals in trains as well, it is comfortable!
→Now I can write journals on trains as well. It is comfortable!
It is very useful to write journals in anywhere!
→It is very useful to write journals anywhere!
In the train to the office, I usually have an spare time, and I have wanted to use the Internet, because is I can use the Internet, I can do a lot of things.
→On the train to the office, I usually have an spare time, and I have wanted to use the Internet. If I can use the Internet, I can do a lot of things.
I usually watch video podcasts in trains, or read books.
→I usually watch video podcasts or read books on trains.
Now I can write journals in trains as well, it is comfortable!
→Now I can write journals on trains as well. It is comfortable!
Writing a diary with an iPad
It is very useful to write journals anywhere!
On the train to the office, I usually have spare time, and I have wanted to use the Internet. If I can use the Internet, I can do a lot of things. (this was a run-on sentence)
I usually watch video podcasts or read books on trains.
Now I can write journals on trains as well. It is comfortable!
>3d
I'm sure everybody want it :)
>Ben
I sometimes make run-on sentences. I try to make short sentences.