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Jul 18, 2011 06:54 Meginkitty made 10 corrections for College Education Necessary...
Interesting entry! I think a college education is also necessary nowadays. I've written corrections in red and some native suggestion...
May 7, 2011 07:13 阿主塔 !!! made 13 corrections for To Eliminate World Hunger
Nice entry ! Important and delicate theme, it's nice to know we share the same preoccupations. It is sad, but that's how our worl...
Apr 11, 2011 02:09 xChilla made 12 corrections for The World’s Wilderness Area...
I completely agree, there needs to be more done in preserving wildlife. Very good essay!! I noticed you seem to have a similar outlin...
Apr 7, 2011 23:43 ししゃまさみ made 7 corrections for Caffeine Pills
Very good! Keep up the work! ^.^
Apr 7, 2011 11:32 xChilla made 11 corrections for Society with Aging Populati...
Do you mean "daycare" as in "childcare" or do you mean "daily patient care"? Also, "stuff" should...
Apr 6, 2011 13:01 made 9 corrections for Government Keeping Secrets
I agree as well. It's foolish to think that the public is educated enough to handle the information calmly especially in a cataclysmi...
Apr 6, 2011 12:40 Keribo made 14 corrections for Government Keeping Secrets
I agree with you. Classified information is classified for a reason.
Apr 6, 2011 12:39 オードリー 오드리 commented on Government Keeping Secrets
I agree! The government should be able to keep secrets. You made a very good point! (^-^)
Apr 5, 2011 22:45 Koudee made 6 corrections for Gas Companies Drill on Priv...
Your English is very good. I did what I could to help smooth it out and make it sound just a little more native, but I could clearly unde...
Apr 2, 2011 22:30 Greed made 3 corrections for The Benefits of Genetically...
I'm all in favor of GM crops. Cheaper crops also mean cheaper meat, because animal feed will become cheaper as well.
Apr 2, 2011 14:53 Alley made 11 corrections for The Benefits of Genetically...
Very nice job, your point was clear and it was easy to read. I hope my suggestions will help in someway. Keep on practicing because you&#...
Mar 26, 2011 22:15 Greed made 4 corrections for Displayed in Pet Shop Windows
I agree; pets shouldn't be treated like objects advertised and sold in clothing stores or electronics stores. They're living anim...
Mar 25, 2011 10:52 ししゃまさみ made 7 corrections for NOT more Nuclear Power Plants
Tomomonkey san you're English is very good! ^^
Mar 25, 2011 10:45 made 1 corrections for NOT more Nuclear Power Plants
Hmm. I'm not sure if my correction is actually correct. It was a little difficult to figure that out. By saying "none of the cou...
Mar 24, 2011 13:34 Hayden (ヘイデン) made 3 corrections for People Losing their Moral V...
debase = really good diction! But, I suppose if I was reading this essay, I would want to see more about how your society defines "...
Mar 24, 2011 12:31 Annette made 9 corrections for People Losing their Moral V...
I definitely agree that there is a lot wrong with people's behavior in this world. Bullying makes me so angry and it makes me so sad...
Mar 23, 2011 14:48 Ma-Ki- made 6 corrections for Gambling
Interesting post!
Mar 23, 2011 13:41 made 5 corrections for Gambling
Yeah, it should be outlawed. Although you can never truly get rid of it, it will at least minimize the damage.
Mar 20, 2011 09:41 Omicron made 5 corrections for More Music Lessons in Schools
お疲れ様でした。よく分かりました。反対しても、あなたがよく書きました。
Mar 20, 2011 08:10 green commented on More Music Lessons in Schools
nice essay. i think... compulsory music lessons make no sense. if kids want to learn something, though, i think we should give them a ch...
Mar 20, 2011 05:56 ukulelesteve made 13 corrections for More Music Lessons in Schools
Not a bad speech. It is difficult to write a persuasive speech in a second language; I applaud you. Many of the things I corrected were g...
Mar 20, 2011 04:35 Nana commented on More Music Lessons in Schools
^^ your journal entry is written very well. But, No music classes! D: That's extreme isn't it lol no I'm joking. :3 you typed...
Mar 19, 2011 06:15 made 2 corrections for Sport Players in Match-Fixi...
This is really good, mainly the changes i made will make it sound smoother.
Mar 15, 2011 13:12 ying made 9 corrections for Police Using Tasers
The camera is a good idea. There have been cases of Taser abuse by police officers in America.
Mar 13, 2011 15:11 Sheena made 10 corrections for Australia fighting the War ...
You did really well ;)
Mar 11, 2011 00:48 Hayden (ヘイデン) made 5 corrections for Big Sport on Free TV (1/2)
I don't really like sports. So I have no opinion. それはノ・コメントです。ww
Mar 10, 2011 08:04 made 7 corrections for Free-Range Products (2/2)
well done :)
Mar 10, 2011 07:44 made 4 corrections for Free-Range Products (1/2)
well done :) Beware though, the fact that the consumer is willing to pay more for 'free range' goods, can and does lead to food ...
Mar 9, 2011 07:01 made 7 corrections for Cheap Supermarket Milk in A...
well done, and well argued :)
Mar 9, 2011 06:58 Tom made 8 corrections for Cheap Supermarket Milk in A...
Most statements above were conclusions. The statements should lead to a conclusion.
Mar 8, 2011 20:53 JoshS made 2 corrections for Cheap Supermarket Milk in A...
Your English is quite good. I disagree with you on the issue a little bit though. First of all, the big supermarkets have said they will ...
Mar 5, 2011 17:18 borrrden made 7 corrections for Overturning the Wishes of a...
最後の文章は不要です。同じことを繰り返すだけじゃだめです、作文にとっては。
Mar 5, 2011 14:20 taishou-a made 4 corrections for Overturning the Wishes of a...
here they make you decide whether to be an organ donor in a box when you get your driver's license. I don't think it can be overt...
Mar 4, 2011 21:32 舞雷巣(ブライス) made 6 corrections for The Size of Class (1/2)
I agree, there are those who struggle and then their are those left unchallenged.
Mar 3, 2011 18:44 roxya made 2 corrections for The Last two paragraphs fro...
I think phone conversations are too distracting, whether or not they have a hands free device...
Mar 3, 2011 15:09 RMXSeven made 7 corrections for Should drivers be banned fr...
Hello, Interesting argument you have here. When I went to Hong Kong, the Taxi driver had 6 mobile phones! They were all on the dashboa...
Mar 3, 2011 15:01 borrrden commented on Should drivers be banned fr...
Almost, there needs to be empty space between each paragraph though!! For example, between "three reasons" and "First of ...
Mar 3, 2011 11:55 borrrden made 13 corrections for Should Drivers be banned fr...
I think your argument is flawed. I will address each point: 1) Hands free devices are more difficult to listen to This seems like ...
Mar 1, 2011 23:33 Rosalee made 11 corrections for Are prisons are effective w...
Very good. Be careful with your a and an a, an, called the indefinite article (or, by some grammarians, determiner). In origin, a and...