Society with Aging Population Facing a Crisis
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Society with aging population will definitely face a crisis in the future. In fact, some specialists propose that Japan should change the social system for all generations in several years. There are three reasons why we will get confronted with a crisis resulted from society with aging population.
First of all, society with aging population could lead to a bad cycle of low birthrate. The small population of children will focus more on social welfare than education. Therefore, it’ll be more difficult to born babies, who also won’t try to do so when they grow up in the next generation.
Secondly, it could produce a bad effect on health care. Doctors and nurses in hospitals would not be able to help too many patients in need effectively. Added to this, stuffs would be shorter in day care, where they don’t get sufficient salary even now.
Finally, it would require more taxes than we pay. For example, the system of the health insurance would get disrupted due to unfair tax payment imposed on minor workers. Consequently, they lose too much money to use, causing the economic collapse.
Therefore, it can be said that society with aging population has many difficulties. For that reason, a crisis will confront it in the future.
First of all, society with aging population could lead to a bad cycle of low birthrate. The small population of children will focus more on social welfare than education. Therefore, it’ll be more difficult to born babies, who also won’t try to do so when they grow up in the next generation.
Secondly, it could produce a bad effect on health care. Doctors and nurses in hospitals would not be able to help too many patients in need effectively. Added to this, stuffs would be shorter in day care, where they don’t get sufficient salary even now.
Finally, it would require more taxes than we pay. For example, the system of the health insurance would get disrupted due to unfair tax payment imposed on minor workers. Consequently, they lose too much money to use, causing the economic collapse.
Therefore, it can be said that society with aging population has many difficulties. For that reason, a crisis will confront it in the future.

Society Societies with Aging Population Facing a Crisis
In fact, some specialists propose that Japan should change the social system for all later generations in several years.
There are three reasons why we will get be confronted with a crisis resulted caused by from this society with aging population.
Therefore, it’ll be more difficult to born babies have children, who also won’t try to act in the same way do so when they grow up in the next generation.
Secondly, it could produce a badly effect on health care.
Doctors and nurses in hospitals would not be able to help too so many patients in need effectively.
Added to this, stuffs would be shorter in day care, where they don’t get sufficient salary even now.
Finally, it would require more taxes than we are paying.
Consequently, they would lose too much money to use, causing the an economic collapse.
For that reason, a crisis will confront could result it in the future.
I am so happy becasue I am waiting for corrections.
Society's with Aging Populations are Facing a Crisis (Society's Aging Population Face a Crisis) <-- this sounds more like title because it is blunt and uses less words.
Societies with an aging population will definitely face a crisis in the future.
In fact, some specialists propose that Japan should change the social system for all future generations in the next few years. Or.. "next several years."
There are three reasons why we will get confronted with a crisis as a result of societies with aging populations. (either say "with an aging population" or "with aging populations")
First of all, societies with aging populations could lead to a bad cycle of low birthrate.
A small population of children would have to focus more on social welfare than education.
Therefore, it’ll be more difficult to raise children, and as a result they will be unlikely to raise their own children when they are adults.
Doctors and nurses in hospitals would not be able to effectively help too many patients in need. (the split infinitive is somewhat controversial, but I think it is generally accepted in most cases. If you don't want to use it, it's your decision.)
Added to this, stuffs would be shorter in day care, where they don’t get sufficient salary even now. (see below)
Finally, it would require more taxes than we are paying now. Or... Finally, it would require us to pay more taxes.
For example, the system of the health insurance would get disrupted due to unfair tax requirements imposed on minor workers.
Very interesting essay though! I'm impressed at your ability to talk of such complicated things. Someday I hope I can write like this in Japanese.
your comment si very helpful for me!
You can do it soon!
I need to study harder, too.