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The benefits of genetically modified crops outweigh the dangers. In fact, whilst it is assumed groundlessly that genetically modified (GM) crops may do serious damage to our health, the scientific knowledge surely have created a varieties of GM foods with many advantages in cultivation. There are three reasons why it is more important for us to produce GM crops.
First of all, GM crops can lead to the deterrent of global warming. GM crops need less fuel because farmers don’t use machines to cultivate farmlands many times. Consequently, this could result in steady food supply including normal crops all around the world.
Secondly, it can have the strong resistance to disease and pests. A study introducing GM crops shows that only one chemical can prevent them from dying easily due to pest and disease. Added to this, it is also said that the element made in crops can kill inimical creatures.
Finally, it could contribute to world hunger. The countries succeeding in producing more crops than they need can provide them for other countries hoping for more foods. Also, they could cultivate GM crops modified to survive in specific infertile areas.
Therefore, it can be said that GM crops will play an important role in food production. For that reason, the advantages of GM crops definitely outweigh the dangers.
First of all, GM crops can lead to the deterrent of global warming. GM crops need less fuel because farmers don’t use machines to cultivate farmlands many times. Consequently, this could result in steady food supply including normal crops all around the world.
Secondly, it can have the strong resistance to disease and pests. A study introducing GM crops shows that only one chemical can prevent them from dying easily due to pest and disease. Added to this, it is also said that the element made in crops can kill inimical creatures.
Finally, it could contribute to world hunger. The countries succeeding in producing more crops than they need can provide them for other countries hoping for more foods. Also, they could cultivate GM crops modified to survive in specific infertile areas.
Therefore, it can be said that GM crops will play an important role in food production. For that reason, the advantages of GM crops definitely outweigh the dangers.
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The benefits of genetically modified crops outweigh the dangers.Changing dangers to disadvantages would, to me, sound more natural.
In fact, whilst it is assumed groundlessly that genetically modified (GM) crops may do serious damage to our health, the scientific knowledge community surely have created a varieties of GM foods with many advantages in cultivation. Did you want to say that there are people that work on GM crops? Then scientific community would work well here.
First of all, GM crops can lead to the be a deterrent of global warming.
GM crops need less fuel because farmers don’t use machines to cultivate farmlands many times.don't need to cultivate their farmlands multiple timesI think this sounds more natural
Consequently, this could result in steady food supply including normal crops all around the world.Do you mean, in addition to the crop yields from non-GM crops, GM crops would increase the world food supply? Maybe this could be reworded as "Consequently, this could result in an increase in the world food supply."
Secondly, it they can have the a strong resistance to disease and pests.
A study introducing GM crops to a farm shows that only one chemical can prevent them from dying easily due to pest and disease. Just a suggestion, but I think that it needs something for the GM crops to be introduced to.
Added to this, it is the study also said concluded that the element made in these crops can kill inimical creatures.
Finally, it could contribute to alleviate (or help) world hunger.contribute to implies that it's adding to the world hunger problem
The countries succeeding in producing more crops than they need can provide them for other countries hoping for more foods in need.
Also, GM crops can be cultivated they could cultivate GM crops modified to survive in specific infertile areas. Just a rewording suggestion
Very nice job, your point was clear and it was easy to read. I hope my suggestions will help in someway. Keep on practicing because you're doing great!
Especially, your comments are really helphul for me!
In fact, whilst it is assumed groundlessly that genetically modified (GM) crops may do serious damage to our health, the scientific knowledge community surely has created a varieties of GM foods with many advantages in cultivation.
First of all, GM crops can (lead to the deterrent of) fight global warming.
A study introducing of GM crops shows that only one single chemical can prevent them from dying easily due to pest and disease. (Do you mean that with just one chemical added to a crop, they won't die easily from disease and pests? That's what I assumed.)
I'm all in favor of GM crops. Cheaper crops also mean cheaper meat, because animal feed will become cheaper as well.
Yes, your assumption is what I want to drive at.
To be cheap is one of the important elements in ecconomics.