People Losing their Moral Values
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People in modern society are definitely losing their moral values. In fact, Japanese government advocates that school education must focus on moral education than moral before. There are three reasons why moral values are lowering these days.
First of all, education dose not play an important role in improving kids’ moral value fully. Schools have regarded that to get high score in the achievement tests is more important than to cultivate children’s mind. Consequently, students lose the opportunities to consider what to do for others as well as the corporation between school and home becomes weak.
Secondly, public manners apparently become wrong. It is a good example to see not only passengers talking their mobile phone, but nobody cautioning them not to do. That’s because they try to keep them from hassles, which is the same as other unreasonable manners in public.
Finally, the Internet has the bad effects on moral values. Not needing to talk in person, they tend to write derogatory comments on the website. It sometimes leads to serious bullying, some of which become the social problem as children’s suicides in Japan.
It can be said then that we should think how to behave for others. For that reason, people in modern society are debasing themselves in their moral values.
First of all, education dose not play an important role in improving kids’ moral value fully. Schools have regarded that to get high score in the achievement tests is more important than to cultivate children’s mind. Consequently, students lose the opportunities to consider what to do for others as well as the corporation between school and home becomes weak.
Secondly, public manners apparently become wrong. It is a good example to see not only passengers talking their mobile phone, but nobody cautioning them not to do. That’s because they try to keep them from hassles, which is the same as other unreasonable manners in public.
Finally, the Internet has the bad effects on moral values. Not needing to talk in person, they tend to write derogatory comments on the website. It sometimes leads to serious bullying, some of which become the social problem as children’s suicides in Japan.
It can be said then that we should think how to behave for others. For that reason, people in modern society are debasing themselves in their moral values.

People Losing their Moral Values
In fact, the Japanese government advocates that school education must focus more on moral education than moral before.
Consequently, students lose the opportunities to consider what to do for others and as well, the cooperation between school and home becomes weak.
It is common a good example to see passengers not only passengers talking on their mobile phones, but nobody cautioning them not to do so.
That’s because they try to keep themselves from hassles/...try to stay away from confrontation, which is the same as other unreasonable manners in public.
Finally, the internet has the bad effects on moral values.
Not needing to talk in person, people they tend to write derogatory comments on the websites/on the web.
It sometimes leads to serious bullying, some of which contributes to become the social problems such as children’s suicides in Japan.
It can be said then that we should think how to behave with for others.
Thanks for your thoughts.
"Confrrontation" seems a helpuful word in essays.
In Japan, it is said widely that Japanese moral i geeting bad.
Sitting directly on the ground in the city, throwing tabacos way everywhere, and others, for exmple.
How about your country?
We need to consider it deeply, especially in education.
Yes, I definitely agree that people's morals and manners are low here, too. People don't sit directly on the ground in the city but they do drop cigarette buts everywhere, as you mentioned. I do think what's considered acceptable or not depends on the culture. I don't think it would matter so much to people here if people were to sit directly on the ground in the city. Of course, it also depends on the context. If you were a business person, all dressed up in nice clothes, it would like kind of silly. :)
First of all, education does not play an important role in improving kids’ moral values fully.
Secondly, public manners have apparently become wrong.
For that reason, people in modern society are debasing their moral values.
But, I suppose if I was reading this essay, I would want to see more about how your society defines "morality." But, then again, I didn't see the prompt. Good essay!
One of the most diffiucult things in writting is which words are good diction. So, thank you for your advice.