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Australia should not continue fighting the war in Afghanistan. In reality, many Australian people claim that it is time to let army leave back down for Australia. There are three reasons why Australia has to stop fighting the war there.
First of all, it is so dangerous that Australia have lost a large number of the people. Life is more important than any other thing in the world. We would not forget that we are born not to kill precious friends but to help each other.
Next, the war spends much money in total. They would make the most of the money for such something necessary as education, health, and social welfare. We must first consider what people invoke to live a comfortable life.
Finally, Australia can give the different kinds of support for both America and Afghanistan. As the same as Japan, it is possible to give money and stuff to demand the needs of everyday life. Added to this, they also help find the terrorists and keep peace with less violence.
It can be said, then, that Australia does not have good advantages over the war in Afghanistan. For that reason, they should not keep on taking part in it.
First of all, it is so dangerous that Australia have lost a large number of the people. Life is more important than any other thing in the world. We would not forget that we are born not to kill precious friends but to help each other.
Next, the war spends much money in total. They would make the most of the money for such something necessary as education, health, and social welfare. We must first consider what people invoke to live a comfortable life.
Finally, Australia can give the different kinds of support for both America and Afghanistan. As the same as Japan, it is possible to give money and stuff to demand the needs of everyday life. Added to this, they also help find the terrorists and keep peace with less violence.
It can be said, then, that Australia does not have good advantages over the war in Afghanistan. For that reason, they should not keep on taking part in it.
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In reality, many Australian people claim that it is time to let the army leave back down for return to Australia.
There are three reasons why Australia has to/ should stop fighting the war there.(I think "should" is a better word in this context).
First of all, it is so dangerous that Australia have lost a large number of the people. it is dangerous enough to have cost Australia a large number of people. (What you said is grammatically correct, but maybe not perfectly easy to understand).
Next, the war spends much costs a lot of money in total. (Again, I understand your meaning, but my correction is more colloquial.)
They would make the most of the money for such should spend that money on something necessary, such as education, health, and social welfare.
We must first consider what people invoke need(?) to live a comfortable life.
Finally, Australia can give the different kinds of support for to both America and Afghanistan.
As the same as in Japan, it is possible to give money and stuff etc. to meet the needs of everyday life. ("Stuff" can be replaced with "etc." to sound more formal).
Added to this, they could also help find the terrorists and keep peace with less violence.
It can be said, then, that involvement in the war in Afghanistan is not advantageous to Australia.
I am happy!