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Nov 26, 2011 01:02
If you are kind enough to give me some useful information, I will help you with your Japanese writing in return.

First, I would like to know if these English sentences are correct or not.
Secondly, please let me know other words or structures I can use.
I hope you see the images and videos on the links below as well. That will help in understanding each sentence.


1) This product is a pencil sharpener in the shape of an apple. Sharpening a red pencil with it looks just like peeling an real apple.

この製品はリンゴの形をした鉛筆削りです。これで赤鉛筆を削るのは、本物のリンゴの皮をむいているように見えます。

kono seihin wa ringo no katachi wo shita enpitsu kezuri desu. korede akaenpitsu wo kezuru nowa, honmono no ringo no kawa wo muiteiru youni miemasu.

http://niheibei.com/post/13249191985/this-product-is-a-pencil-sharpener-in-the-shape-of


2) I was dumbfounded by how my father drank bottles of Yakult.

父のヤクルトの飲み方に絶句した。

chichi no yakuruto no nomikata ni zekku shita.

http://niheibei.com/post/13295086240/i-was-dumbfounded-by-how-my-father-drank-bottles


Thanks for reading!^^
Tommy
http://niheibei.com/
http://robotommy.com/
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