Nov.5's blog posts, Japanese train conductors, a CD in a microwave.
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First, I would like to know if these English sentences are correct or not.
Second, please let me know other words or structures I can use.
I hope you see the images on the links below as well. That will help in understanding each language.
1) The doors are closing.
ドアが閉まります。(ダァシェリイェス。)
doa ga shimarimasu. daa shieriiesu.
http://niheibei.com/post/12323729073/the-doors-are-closing-doa
2) ‘If you heated a CD in a microwave oven, you could see a cool stuff.’
「電子レンジでCDをチンするとかっけぇwwwww」
denshi renji de cd wo chin suruto kakkee
http://niheibei.com/post/12325281647/if-you-heated-a-cd-in-a-microwave-oven-you-could
Thanks for reading!
Tommy
http://niheibei.com/
http://robotommy.com/
Second, please let me know other words or structures I can use.
I hope you see the images on the links below as well. That will help in understanding each language.
1) The doors are closing.
ドアが閉まります。(ダァシェリイェス。)
doa ga shimarimasu. daa shieriiesu.
http://niheibei.com/post/12323729073/the-doors-are-closing-doa
2) ‘If you heated a CD in a microwave oven, you could see a cool stuff.’
「電子レンジでCDをチンするとかっけぇwwwww」
denshi renji de cd wo chin suruto kakkee
http://niheibei.com/post/12325281647/if-you-heated-a-cd-in-a-microwave-oven-you-could
Thanks for reading!
Tommy
http://niheibei.com/
http://robotommy.com/

2) ‘If you heated a CD in a microwave oven, you can see a cool stuff.’Cool stuff happens to a CD when you put it in the microwave.
Red is corrections.
Blue is suggestions.
I learned from the text,'English grammar in use' that 'When you imagine something like this, you use if + past
(if I found, if there was, if we didn't etc.).'
For example...
If I were to eat now, I wouldn't be hungry later.
(this is the same sentence as...)
If I eat now, I won't be hungry later.
There are some slight differences in these two sentences, you see?
Think of it like this:
If you heat a CD in a microwave = action
you can see cool stuff = consequence
2) ‘If you heated a CD in a microwave oven, you could will see a cool stuff.’or you could say, "If you heat a CD in a microwave, you will see something cool."or"If you were to heat a CD in a microwave, you would see something cool."
Could you teach me about the difference between "If you heated" and "If you were to heat"?