Long Time No See!!

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Oct 17, 2011 23:36
I went to Kinkakuji today. Do you know Kinkakuji? It is the famous Japanese temple in Kyoto, and it was my second visit. Though I have lived in Kyoto for seven years, I didn't go there because it's far from my home. It was when I was an elementary school student that I visited Kinkakuji for the first time, and it was also the first visit to Kyoto on a school excursion. It must have been fun but I hardly remember that.

Then, my second visit was great. Kinkakuji was so beautiful that I took many pictures. This is one of the picture. The appearance of Kinkakuji on the surface of the water is a special beauty.

Kyoto has a lot of places to visit. Please come to Kyoto and visit many temples and shrines, and you'll have a good time there. I'm ready to guide you around Kyoto!!LOL
Bryan
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 18, 2011 00:14
  • It was when I was an elementary school student that I visited Kinkakuji for the first time, and it was also the first visit to Kyoto on a school excursion.

  • It was when I was in elementary school student that I visited Kinkakuji for the first time, and it was also my first visit to Kyoto on a school trip. (sounds more natural)

 
  • It must have been fun but I hardly remember that.

  • It must have been fun but I hardly remember it.

 
  • Kinkakuji was so beautiful that I took many pictures.

  • Kinkakuji was so beautiful, so I took many pictures.

 
  • This is one of the picture.

  • This is one of the pictures.

 
  • The appearance of Kinkakuji on the surface of the water is a special beauty.

  • The appearance of Kinkakuji's reflection on the surface of the water is especially beautiful. (more natural)

 
  • Please come to Kyoto and visit many temples and shrines, and you'll have a good time there.

  • Please come to Kyoto and visit many temples and shrines, and you'll have a good time here.

 

Your English is good!
Kyoto is awesome. I visited Kinkakuji, Ginkakuji, Kiyomizu (my favorite), and Ryoanji. I studied about those places in my Japanese art history class in college.

Oct 18, 2011 00:32 Taro
Thanks!!
Kyoto is worth visiting, and we can learn a lot about Japanese history.
Shweta
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 18, 2011 03:20
  • It is the famous Japanese temple in Kyoto, and it was my second visit.

  • It is a famous Japanese temple in Kyoto, and this was my second visit.

 
  • It was when I was an elementary school student that I visited Kinkakuji for the first time, and it was also the first visit to Kyoto on a school excursion.

  • When I first went to Kinkakuji, I was an elementary school student and it was also my first visit to Kyoto on a school excursion.

 

Wow! That looks beautiful!!! It's almost like a painting [:

I wish I could see it in person >.<

Good luck with English!!

Oct 18, 2011 10:28 Taro
Thanks!!
Please come to Kyoto someday!

Oct 18, 2011 11:19 Shweta
I will!
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