My daughters gave me some gifts today.

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Jun 17, 2017 20:59
My daughters gave me some gifts today. Since it's a father's day tomorrow. They are socks and a ball that my daughter wrote a message on it. It says "Thank you for always taking care of me.". However it has no chance to use the ball, I like it very match!
VinceK
Jun 18, 2017 01:52
  • My daughters gave me some gifts today.
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  • Since it's a father's day tomorrow.

  • since it's a Father's Day tomorrow.

    since が導く節を前の主節と組んだ方が文法的に正しいなんですが、書いた通りでもよく目にします。

 
  • They are socks and a ball that my daughter wrote a message on it.

  • They are a pair of socks and a ball that (/on which) my daughter wrote a message on it.

 
  • It says "Thank you for always taking care of me.".

  • It says, "Thank you for always taking care of me."

 
  • However it has no chance to use the ball, I like it very match!

  • Even though I will have no (/I will rarely have a) chance to use the ball, I like it very much!

 

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My daughters gave me some gifts today. Since it's a father's day tomorrow. They are socks and a ball that my daughter wrote a message on it. It says "Thank you for always taking care of me.". However it has no chance to use the ball, I like it very match!


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