Getting Busy Again

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Nov 18, 2011 00:22 busy work
I'm getting busy at work again. It seems to last until next month.
To tell the truth, I want to rest more few days, but I must finish my work on time.
It's time to switch my mind and do it perfectly.
Ballergm46254
Thank you for your correction!
Nov 18, 2011 01:07
  • To tell the truth, I want to rest more few days, but I must finish my work on time.

  • To tell the truth, I want to rest more few a few more days, but I must finish my work on time.

 

Nov 19, 2011 00:04 SineLittle
Thank you for correcting my entry. :)
That's very kind of you.
FooSoft
Thank you for your correction!
Nov 18, 2011 05:58
  • It seems to last until next month.

  • It seems like this will last until next month.

 
  • To tell the truth, I want to rest more few days, but I must finish my work on time.

  • To be honest, I would like to rest more few days, but I must finish my work on time. (Prior correction is good, but I think this sounds more natural)

 
  • It's time to switch my mind and do it perfectly.

  • It's time to get my head in gear and get things done.("Switch" sounds like very concise action, but "mind" isn't something tangible that you can change in this manner. This contrast makes this sound really strange. Also, "perfectly" in English sounds a little bit snobbish, and I don't think you were going for that :)).

 

Nov 19, 2011 00:10 SineLittle
Thank you for correcting my entry. :))
Your corrections and comments are really helpful for me!
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