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Sep 2, 2011 22:47 Typhoon
The big typhoon is reaching Kansai region now. Lots of rain pours with strong wind. Fortunately, it was weaker when I was on the way home. Maybe it will continue until tomorrow afternoon. I should stay home tomorrow.
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T.Winnie
Sep 2, 2011 22:50
  • Fortunately, it was weaker when I was on the way home.

  • Fortunately, it was weaker than when I was on the way home.

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Sep 3, 2011 00:08 mamedori
  • This correction is incorrect. This correction indicates that the rain was STRONGER on the way home (which seems to be the opposite of what you want to say).

 
Sep 4, 2011 19:54 SineLittle
  • T.Winnie-san
    Thank you for correcting my entry. :)
    Even though I wanted to say it was weak, that's very kind of you. :
    D

    Mamedori-san
    Thank you for your comment. :)
    You are right. I mean it was weak when I was on my way home.
mamedori
Sep 3, 2011 00:07
  • The big typhoon is reaching Kansai region now.

  • The big typhoon has reached the Kansai region now.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Lots of rain pours with strong wind.

  • Lots of rain is pouring down along with strong winds.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Fortunately, it was weaker when I was on the way home.

  • Fortunately, it was weaker when I was on my way home.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Maybe it will continue until tomorrow afternoon.

  • It might continue until tomorrow afternoon.

1 people think this correction is good.  
Thank you for your correction!

 
Sep 4, 2011 19:54 SineLittle
  • Thank you for correcting my entry. :)
    That's very helpful. :D
tokyoyuki
Sep 3, 2011 02:00
  • The big typhoon is reaching Kansai region now.

  • A big typhoon has reached the Kansai region now.

 
  • I should stay home tomorrow.

  • I probably should stay home tomorrow.

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Sep 4, 2011 19:57 SineLittle
  • Thank you for correcting my entry. :)
    I'm not good at using article. That's very helpful.
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