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Hi!.
I'm into music, movies, and art. I also like backpacking. I have been to Europe and the U.S and several Asian countries.
I haven't practiced English enough. Someday I'd like to become fluent in English.
For now, I'm trying to devote as much time as I can.
I think we're never too old to learn something new.

Could you please correct my sentences so that they sound natural?
I don't worry about each small thing. I want to study while having fun.
Let's help each other!

I sometimes write on the blog after you corrected.
https://medium.com/@rumim_en

こんにちは!
私は音楽、映画、アート、 バックパック旅行が好きです。 これまでヨーロッパとアメリカといくつかのアジアの国へ行きました。
しかし私には英語の練習が足りていません。 いつか流暢に英語を話せるようになりたいです。今のところできるだけ多くの時間を費やそうとしています。私たちは何か新しいことを学ぶには年を取りすぎているってことはないと思うのです。
自然に聞こえるよう文章を修正してくれませんか。細かなことは気にせず、 楽しく勉強したいと思っています。
お互いに助け合いましょう。よろしくね。

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