For TOEFL writing test

For TOEFL writing test

Q: Who do would you would like to go to travel with?

Discribe the person and the reasons.

A: The person I would like to go to travel with is my boyfriend.

First, I would like to travel to the developing countries.

For In many cases, it is dangerous to go around in such countries alone, especially in the dark.

However, if I go with my boyfriend, it becomes easier for me to go around the city in the dark.

Second, with my boyfriend, it is easier to do many outdoor activities.

If I go to travel with my girlfriends, most of them don't like doing outdoor activities, they like shopping or eating sweets.

So, for me, it is better to go to travel with my boyfriends and enjoy outdoor activities.(Originally, this means you have many boyfriends. I think you are talking about only one.)

Because of the 2 reasons above, I would like to travel with my boyfriend, especially when I go to overseas.

Q: Who would you like to travel with?

Describe the person and the reasons.

A: The person I would like to travel with is my boyfriend.

I think so because of the two reasons below.

First, I would like to travel to developing countries.

For many cases, it is dangerous to go around in such countries alone - especially in the dark. (or) "alone, especially in the dark."

If I travel with my girlfriends, most of them don't like doing outdoor activities; they like shopping or eating sweets.

So, for me, it is better to travel with my boyfriend and enjoy outdoor activities.

Because of the two reasons above, I would like to travel with my boyfriend, especially when I go overseas.