Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea

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Sep 2, 2008 02:07

2 month ago,

I wrote this diary "Do you have any questions for me?"

http://lang-8.com/?m=pc&a=page_fh_diary&l=jp&target_c_diary_id=14298&comment_count=3

Kohlrak who is user of lang-8 gave me a good advice to me.

"Write about the last movie you saw. "

So I write about that.

The title is "Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea"

This is the Japanese Animation movie made by "STUDIO GHIBLI" that the best animation studio in Japan

The name of central character is "Sosuke"

Sosuke is 5 years old.

Sosuke meet a fish with human girl's face.

Sosuke named her "Ponyo".

Ponyo loves Sosuke.

So Ponyo said
" I want to be a human being because I love Sosuke" !!!

Ponyo has pure mind

My heart twinged a bit.

Ami

Sep 2, 2008 02:18

I wrote this diary "Do you have any questions for me?"
I wrote this diary and asked, "Do you have any questions for me?"

Kohlrak who is user of lang-8 gave me a good advice to me.
Kohlrak, who is a user of lang-8, gave me a good advice to me.

So I write about that.
So I'm writeing about that.

The title is "Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea"
The title of the movie is called "Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea"

The name of central character is "Sosuke"
The name of central the main character is "Sosuke"

Sosuke meet a fish with human girl's face.
Sosuke meet a fish with a human girl's face.

" I want to be a human beining because I love Sosuke" !!!
" I want to be a human beining being because I love Sosuke!!!"!!!

Ponyo has pure mind
Ponyo has a pure mind

Aw, that seems like a very touching movie. I really want to watch it now! Another user here also talked about that movie. Did Ponyo and Sosuke end up together? I'd really like to know, please! Thank you! :D

pandeiro245

Sep 2, 2008 02:31

Thank you for your comment!

>Did Ponyo and Sosuke end up together?

Yes !
I want to see the movie.
Can they in America see the movie ??

Ami

Sep 2, 2008 03:39

YAY! THEY END UP TOGETHER!
I'm so happy for them! Heehee!
No, I don't think we can see it here yet because it just released in Japan, right?
That's so sad!! :( I really want to see if Sosuke is good looking too. Haha!

翔太

Sep 2, 2008 05:09

I wrote this diary "Do you have any questions for me?"
I wrote this diary entry and asked, "Do you have any questions for me?" (You write "in" a diary, and you write "diary entries." Also, I think it would be a nice time to point the difference between diaries and journals. Diaries, while online it seems to mean Journals, are basically the same as Journals, only they're private and usually are not ment to be read by others unless in event of death or emergency. Journals are more public, and ment to be read by teachers, friends, or family. Usually diaries are about very personal things like relationships, while Journals [though written the same manner] are usually to record events from a vacation of some sort. However, you never read a "diary" under any circumstances. It's considered messing around with personal things, as it's [in movies] usually symbolic of the secrets of young girls.)

Kohlrak who is user of lang-8 gave me a good advice to me.
Kohlrak who is user of lang-8 gave me some good advice to me. (Usually you write either "gave me good advice" or "give god advice to me." Though, sometimes i will say what you said when i'm nervous or tired. Also, "some" can usually be omitted, but it's usually kept there to keep the sentance long.)

So I write about that.
So I'll (Contraction of "I will") write about that. (Both corrections are correct. The other was for present tense, and this one is for future tense.)

The title is "Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea"
The title is "Ponyo on the Cliff by the Sea" (This is fine. The other is a little more formal.)

This is the Japanese Animation movie made by "STUDIO GHIBLI" that the best animation studio in Japan
This is the Japanese Animation movie made by "STUDIO GHIBLI," that the best animation studio in Japan

The name of central character is "Sosuke"
The name of central character is "Sosuke." (The quotes are sometimes ommitted, but it's usually best to leave them there.)

Ponyo loves Sosuke.
Ponyo came to loves Sosuke. (Try to keep the same tense when talking about the same thing.)

" I want to be a human beining because I love Sosuke" !!!
" I want to be a human beining because I love you!!!" (The other correction was also correct.)