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Sep 26th 2011 05:38 blood finger hurt cut
Today I have decided that I will clean my room.

I was looking for some documents, my curriculum vitae and cover letter. When I browse my shelf with folders I cut myself. From my finger stream forth bright red blood. It was everywhere! I screamed very loud and my husband came to rescue me.

When he realized what was happened, he smiled at first. This made me angry. Unfortunately he understand how serious the situation is... and he kiss my finger :)

He give me a sticker and I forgave him his stupid smile :)


Author: Magdalena
arogala
Thank you for your correction!
Sep 26th 2011 05:44
  • Today I have decided that I will clean my room.

  • Today I have decided that I will clean my room.

 
  • I was looking for some documents, my curriculum vitae and cover letter.

  • I was looking for some documents, especially my curriculum vitae and cover letter.

 
  • When I browse my shelf with folders I cut myself.

  • As I was going through my shelf which had folders on it, I cut myself

 
  • From my finger stream forth bright red blood.

  • A stream of bright red blood came from my finger

 
  • When he realized what was happened, he smiled at first.

  • When he realized what has was happened, he smiled at first.

 
  • This made me angry.

  • This which made me angry.

 
  • Unfortunately he understand how serious the situation is...

  • Unfortunately thankfully he understand understood how serious the situation was is..

 
  • and he kiss my finger :)

  • and he kissed kiss my finger :)

 
  • He give me a sticker and I forgave him his stupid smile :)

  • He give me a sticker and I forgave him for his stupid smile :)

 
Sep 26th 2011 05:55 noisy
Thank you very much! This was my first entry here (I share this account with my husband) so this is nice to got correction so quickly!
Sep 26th 2011 05:56 noisy
Of course I mean "Fortunately" instead "Unfortunately", would be ok?
Jonadab
Thank you for your correction!
Sep 26th 2011 11:23
  • Today I have decided that I will clean my room.

  • Today I decided that I would clean my room.

 
  • I was looking for some documents, my curriculum vitae and cover letter.

  • I was looking for some documents, particularly my curriculum vitae and cover letter.

 
  • When I browse my shelf with folders I cut myself.

  • While I was browsing through the folders on my shelf, I cut myself.

 
  • From my finger stream forth bright red blood.

  • From my finger streamed forth bright red blood.

 
  • I screamed very loud and my husband came to rescue me.

  • I screamed very loudly, and my husband came to rescue me.

 
  • When he realized what was happened, he smiled at first.

  • When he realized what had happened, he smiled at first.

 
  • Unfortunately he understand how serious the situation is...

  • Then he realized how serious the situation seemed to me...

 
  • and he kiss my finger :)

  • and he kissed my finger :)

 
Sep 27th 2011 04:26 noisy
Thank you very much :)
Jonadab
Sep 27th 2011 08:43
I just realized that I should probably mention the fact that the phrase "curriculum vitae" is so rarely used in America that most people don't even know what it means. We just call it a "resume" (pronounced or /REZZ-uh-may/ or sometimes /REZZ-oo-may/, or occasionally somebody who's trying to sound precocious will say /RAY-zoo-may/). However, they do call it a "curriculum vitae" in other parts of the English-speaking world, e.g., in England.
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