Popular corrections

These corrections got a lot of 'native nods' recently. ('Public' entries only.)

  • Hello, This is Danilo today I want to share a story about me
  • Hello, this is Danilo. Today I want to share a story about me.
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  • Hello, This is Danilo today I want to share a story about me
  • She always says like "I want to have thinner legs like A does.
  • She always says things like "I want to have thinner legs like A does" or.
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  • #219
  • I want to be as smart as B is."
  • "I want to be as smart as B is."
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  • #219
  • The manager have reached a result that performances of Mr.
  • The manager have reached a result that performances of Mr.The manager have has reached a result concluded that the performances of Mr.
  • Whilst "reached a result" is grammatically correct, using the word "concluded" is more concise and prominent in the English language.
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  • Today's practice #3 (November 23, 2014)
  • I'm sometimes don't in on Monday.
  • I'm sometimes ndon't in on Mondays. .
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  • 1.
  • I'm have name Pavel.
  • I'mMy have name is Pavel.
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  • 1.
  • The other day I was in the mall looking for some clothes to wear, and something unexpected happened I didn't have money to afford it So I had to go back home without clothes.
  • The other day I was in the mall looking for some clothes to wear, and something unexpected happened. I didn't have money to afford it. So I had to go back home without the clothes.
  • I'd suggest inserting "the" because otherwise the sentence implies that you went home without any clothes on.
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  • Hello, This is Danilo today I want to share a story about me
  • I'm a college student and i want to learn more how to write well in English.
  • I'm a college student and I want to learn more how to write well in English.
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  • Hello my name is joseline I'm from mexico and I'm i a new English learner my favorite food is Mexican, and i like to play soccer and run.
  • I felt trying something new, so I added tofu, tuna fish, radish, and soy sauce to consommé soup.
  • I felt like trying something new, so I added tofu, tuna fish, radish, and soy sauce to consomme soup.
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  • I was hungry and decided to cook a soup.
  • The party was for foreign volunteer staffer, and they wanted to know that something typical Japanese menu.
  • The party was for foreign volunteer staffers, and they wanted to try something on a typical Japanese menu.
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  • The one of the unknown fact "Curry is one of the most popular dishes in Japan."

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  • A woman had a daughter and a step-daughter, and she treated the last one like a servant, and one day she sent her step-daughter to pick some chicory.
  • A woman had a daughter and a step-daughter. and sShe treated the latterst one like a servant, and One day she sent her step-daughter to pick some chicory.
  • Basically just run-on sentences.
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  • The Tale of the Cats(1)
  • The girl asked a cat for a broom and helped him to sweep, to another she took dirty laundry from his hands and helped to tidy up, to another she pulled up the rope of the well and to another she baked loaves.
  • The girl asked a cat for a broom and helped him to sweep; to another she took dirty laundry from his hands and helped tohim tidy up; for another she pulled up the rope of the well; and tofor another she baked loaves.
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  • The Tale of the Cats(1)
  • sometimes, i feel needing to travel< is it correct ?
  • sometimes, i feel needing to travel< is it correct ? "I feel like I need to travel" is correct.
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  • sometimes, i feel needing to travel< is it correct ?
  • I would like to get your answer about my question.
  • I would like to get your answer about my question.
  • or: I'd like you to please answer my question <-- more polite
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  • I would like to get your answer about my question.
  • What do you do on the weekends?
  • What do you do on the weekends?
  • what do you do during the weekend?
  • Native Nods 0 Notebook 1
  • I would like to get your answer about my question.
  • What do you do on the weekends?
  • What do you (usually) do on the weekends?
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  • I would like to get your answer about my question.
  • I am glad to find this (seemingly lol) excellent app, and looking forward to the day my English becomes better.
  • I am glad to find this (seemingly lol) excellent app, and looking forward to the day my English becomes better.
  • You can also use "and am looking" "looking" is an "-ing" ending verb expressing the present progressive (meaning you are currently doing it and may be doing the action as we speak), therefore it has to be joined with the proper form of the word "be" (I am looking, they are looking, he is looking), we call this these linking verbs
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  • Hello, I have just begun using Lang-8, and this is my first post.
  • Just now, I stopped the provision of my personal information on T-point managed by the Culture Convenience Club or the CCC.
  • Just now, I stopped sharing my personal information with T-point which is managed by the Culture Convenience Club (or the CCC).
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  • Stop the provision of my personal information
  • In Japan, many companies use tens of millions personal information and share it among companies through point rewarding system like the T-point card.
  • In Japan, many companies use the personal information of tens of millions of people and share it among companies through point rewarding systems like the T-point card.
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  • Stop the provision of my personal information
  • In Japan, many companies use tens of millions personal information and share it among companies through point rewarding system like the T-point card.
  • In Japan, many companies use the personal information of tens of millions of people and share it among other companies through point rewarding systems like the T-point card.
  • Native Nods 0 Notebook 1
  • Stop the provision of my personal information