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These corrections got a lot of 'native nods' recently. ('Public' entries only.)

  • While I didn't watch at the moment, the slice of bread I baked became black.
  • While I wasn't looking, my toast burnt.
  • This is probably the most natural. some other options, "I looked away for a second, and.." "my toast burnt to a crisp" "my toast blackened/turned black."
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  • Burnt
  • This week is tired continuously.
  • This has been a tiring week.
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  • I had gone workshop for two days.
  • Practice a translation Japanese into English
  • Translation Practice: Japanese into English
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  • Practice a translation Japanese into English
  • In fact I have written my own novel, but I haven't published it yet.
  • In fact, I have written my own novel, but I haven't published it yet.
  • comma makes the sentence flow better
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  • Hello!
  • I would like to travel all around the world and learning about new cultures.
  • I would like to travel all around the world and learning learn about new cultures.
  • since you used the infinitive in the first part of the sentence "to travel" you want to be consistent and use "[to] learn" rather than "learning" which is the conjugated form.
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  • Hello!
  • I could spend the whole day whith my cats, readding, writting or making photos (because I also love it).
  • I could spend the whole day whith with my cats, readding reading, writting writing or making taking photos (because I also love it photography).
  • Small spelling errors; you should use "Take" instead of "make" with photos, and you should also specify that you love photography rather than just saying "it"
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  • Hello!
  • I became a patient person since I've came to this country.
  • I've become a [more] patient person since coming to to this country.
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  • 暗闇の夜 ◆ Darkness Night
  • He used his mother as a test person, but under a pretext, of course, otherwise she would have kicked him out of the house.
  • He used his mother as a test person/guinea pig, but under a pretext, of course, otherwise she would have kicked him out of the house.
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  • Steven Stephen Stevenson and his womanhood detector
  • Steven looks around again, but he can see no one.
  • Steven looks around again, but he can't see anyone.
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  • Steven Stephen Stevenson and his womanhood detector
  • Steven has a flashlight with him, but he hesitates using it, he would look quite silly with it.
  • Steven has a flashlight with him, but he hesitates to use it, as he would look quite silly with it.
  • Or "as it would make him look quite silly".
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  • Steven Stephen Stevenson and his womanhood detector

These are corrections which were bookmarked (added to your notebook) recently ('Public' entries only.)

  • Even he showed me a web side that is www.
  • Even He even showed me a web site that is called www.
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  • When I was in Berlin, I met a guy.
  • I went to eat Thailand food last night because of the party of one of the communities that I have joined in.
  • I went to eat Thai land food last night because of the party of one of the communities associations that I have joined in. had a party.
  • You had most of the right words but some in the wrong place. "Association" and "community" are synonyms but different meaning here. Communities are usually where people live - "Our community is very quiet and clean." Same as neighbourhood. "Association" is a group that you join to do some kind of activity.
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  • I went to eat Thailand food last night because of the party of one of the communities that I have joined in.
  • First, I didn’t get a result of my smooth skin sometimes because of an unshaved beard.
  • Firstly, I didn't always get a close shave.
  • When you shave right to the skin this is called a "close shave" in English.
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  • A RAZOR
  • PS:I am a green hand here, and don’t know how to share pictures with you.
  • PS:I am a green hand newbie here, and don’t know how to share pictures with you.
  • I've never heard "greenhand" (Chinglish I think) but a novice or beginner at something used to be called a "greenhorn." Today it's more common to use "newbie."
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  • I had never seen such a beautiful sunset.
  • Before I graduated from high school, I always dreamed to travel.
  • Before I graduated from high school, it was always my dream to travel.
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  • As the saying goes"世界这么大,我想去看看".
  • Because I thought travel made me feel relax.
  • This is because I thought traveling would make me feel relaxed.
  • 如果想用“because"开头,句子必须有原因和后果。 例: Because I didn't feel well, I went to see the doctor (正确) Because she is cute. (错误) Because she is cute (原因), she is very popular in class(后果/效果) (正确)
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  • As the saying goes"世界这么大,我想去看看".
  • When I traveling, I don't need to think about anything, just to relax and sometimes feel like a bird.
  • When I travel, I can just relax and not think about anything, and sometimes feel as free as a bird.
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  • As the saying goes"世界这么大,我想去看看".
  • Moreover, I love the different habits and custom of many places.
  • Moreover, I love the different cultures and traditions of many places.
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  • As the saying goes"世界这么大,我想去看看".
  • However, I just an university student and I have no more money to travel.
  • However, I am currently just a student and cannot afford to travel.
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  • As the saying goes"世界这么大,我想去看看".
  • He opened his house to me.
  • He opened up his house to me.
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  • When I was in Berlin, I met a guy.