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Sep 19, 2008 22:04
At last Harry Potter volume 7 in Japanese was published last month.
My older son had red it.
He was impressed with it.
But my younger son and I can't read it.
It is unbelievable that we coudln't read any more the book.
Harry gave my kids brave,trust in your freinds,vice,wisdom and whatever.
I want to say thank you to an author and England.
By the way Harry Potter series of Japan's binding were beautiful.
Try looking !
richvh
Sep 19, 2008 22:30
  • At last Harry Potter volume 7 in Japanese was published last month.

  • At last Harry Potter volume 7 was published last month in Japanese. (Or: The Japanese translation of Harry Potter volume 7 was finally published last month.)

 
  • My older son had red it.

  • My older son had read it.

 
  • It is unbelievable that we coudln't read any more the book.

  • It is unbelievable that we couldn't read any more of the book. (Not entirely sure what you were trying to say here.)

 
  • Harry gave my kids brave,trust in your freinds,vice,wisdom and whatever.

  • Harry gave my kids bravery, trust in your friends, advice (I think that's what you mean; "vice" is bad stuff), wisdom and and other things. ("Whatever" is dismissive, so doesn't fit the mood of the sentence.)

 
  • I want to say thank you to an author and England.

  • I want to say thank you to the author and to England.

 
  • By the way Harry Potter series of Japan's binding were beautiful.

  • By the way, the covers used for the Japanese editions of the Harry Potter series were beautiful.

 
  • Try looking !

  • Try looking for them!

 
mei gui
Sep 19, 2008 22:30
  • At last Harry Potter volume 7 in Japanese was published last month.

  • At last Harry Potter volume 7 has been published in Japanese was published last month.

 
  • My older son had red it.

  • My oldest son has read it.

 
  • But my younger son and I can't read it.

  • But my younger son and I can't (haven't?) read it. ("Can't" = できません　"Haven't" = しません)

 
  • It is unbelievable that we coudln't read any more the book.

  • It is unbelievable that we coudln't can't read the book any more the book.

 
  • Harry gave my kids brave,trust in your freinds,vice,wisdom and whatever.

  • Harry gave taught my kids to be wise, to be brave and to trust in your friends. vice,wisdom and whatever.

 
  • I want to say thank you to an author and England.

  • I want to say thank you to an the author and to England.

 
  • By the way Harry Potter series of Japan's binding were beautiful.

  • By the way Harry Potter series of Japan's binding were beautiful. (Do you mean the book covers? You can say: "By the way, the cover of the Harry Potter series in Japan are beautiful" )

 

I finished reading all the Harry Potter books. I think I'd try reading it in Japanese when I get better at it ^^"

mikaringo7
Sep 19, 2008 23:46

richvhさんへ
ゆきの物語の一部を読ませていただきました。添削する箇所が見当たりません。日本人が書いたとしか思えないほどです。ゆっくりと、時間をかけて、全部読ませていただきます。

meiguiさんへ
いつも、てんさくしてくれてありがとう。
すでに第７巻も読まれたのですね。あなたの思ったとおりの結末でしたか？
あなたが、日本語のハリーを読めるようになるようにお手伝いしますね。

richvh
Sep 20, 2008 01:04

実は、日本語をそれほど自然に書くことはまだ出来ないと思います。多くの日本人が下手に書いた最初の案文を書き直してくれたおかげで、「ゆきの物語」はだんだん自然になっています。

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