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ahrum

Nov 28th 2009 01:56

After school, I went to tutor a highschool student.
Her house is quite near from my house so I think it is lucky that I can teach her. Because there is no enough time to her final exams, I had to hurry up. I finished up her textbooks last time and today I had to finished some materials except textbooks. She was too tired and sleepy to open her eyes. I recommended her to wash her face and wake herself up. But she wanted to sleep for a few minutes and requested me to admit it. I felt sympathy with her because I experienced highschool days just like hers. So I gave her 10minutes to sleep and she fall asleep quickly. After 10minute, I wake her up but she wanted more time to sleep. However I rejected it and hit her back to wake her up. Then, she made mind to study hard so I could keep tutoring. After all I made today's numbers but it was hard day because of her fatigue.

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Eggchan

Nov 28th 2009 02:07

Arrow_31_dummyHer house is quite near from my house so I think it is lucky that I can teach her.
Arrow_31Her house is quite near from close to my house so I think it is lucky that I can teach her.
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Arrow_31_dummyBecause there is no enough time to her final exams, I had to hurry up.
Arrow_31Because there is not enough time to her final exams, I had to hurry up.
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Arrow_31_dummyI finished up her textbooks last time and today I had to finished some materials except textbooks.
Arrow_31I finished up her textbooks last time and today I had to finished some other materials except textbooks.
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Arrow_31_dummyShe was too tired and sleepy to open her eyes.
Arrow_31She was too really tired and too sleepy to open her eyes.
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Arrow_31_dummyI recommended her to wash her face and wake herself up.
Arrow_31I recommended her to she wash her face and wake herself up.
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Arrow_31_dummyBut she wanted to sleep for a few minutes and requested me to admit it.
Arrow_31But she wanted to sleep for a few minutes and requested me to admit it.
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Arrow_31_dummyI felt sympathy with her because I experienced highschool days just like hers.
Arrow_31I felt sympathy with for her because I experienced highschool days just like hers.
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Arrow_31_dummySo I gave her 10minutes to sleep and she fall asleep quickly.
Arrow_31So I gave her 10 minutes to sleep and she fell asleep quickly.
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Arrow_31_dummyAfter 10minute, I wake her up but she wanted more time to sleep.
Arrow_31After 10 minutes, I woke her up but she wanted more time to sleep.
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Arrow_31_dummyThen, she made mind to study hard so I could keep tutoring.
Arrow_31Then So she made mind decided to study hard so I could keep tutoring.
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Arrow_31_dummyAfter all I made today's numbers but it was hard day because of her fatigue.
Arrow_31After all In the end I made today's numbers but it was a hard day because of her fatigue.
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Your English is very good. There were only a few small places where I needed to correct. ^^ 화이팅!


ahrum

Nov 28th 2009 02:51

Thank you for your correction!! :)


carsont

Nov 28th 2009 07:23

Arrow_31_dummyAfter school, I went to tutor a highschool student.
Arrow_31After school, I went to tutor a high school student.
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Arrow_31_dummyHer house is quite near from my house so I think it is lucky that I can teach her.
Arrow_31Her house is quite near to my house (or: near mine) so I think it is lucky (or: fortunate) that I can teach her.
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Arrow_31_dummyBecause there is no enough time to her final exams, I had to hurry up.
Arrow_31Because there is not enough time left until her final exams, I had to hurry up.
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Arrow_31_dummyI finished up her textbooks last time and today I had to finished some materials except textbooks.
Arrow_31I finished up her textbooks last time and today I had to finish the remaining materials. (?)
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Arrow_31_dummyShe was too tired and sleepy to open her eyes.
Arrow_31She was too tired and sleepy to open her eyes. (Correct as written, but saying both "tired" and "sleepy" is redundant.)
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Arrow_31_dummyI recommended her to wash her face and wake herself up.
Arrow_31I recommended that she wash her face and wake herself up.
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Arrow_31_dummyBut she wanted to sleep for a few minutes and requested me to admit it.
Arrow_31But she wanted to sleep for a few (more) minutes and requested me to permit it.
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Arrow_31_dummyI felt sympathy with her because I experienced highschool days just like hers.
Arrow_31I felt sympathy for her (or: I was sympathetic) because I experienced high school days just like hers.
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Arrow_31_dummyAfter 10minute, I wake her up but she wanted more time to sleep.
Arrow_31After 10 minutes, I woke her up but she wanted more time to sleep. (or: wanted to sleep longer)
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Arrow_31_dummyThen, she made mind to study hard so I could keep tutoring.
Arrow_31Then, she made up her mind to study hard so I could keep tutoring.
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Arrow_31_dummyAfter all I made today's numbers but it was hard day because of her fatigue.
Arrow_31All in all, I made today's numbers but it was a hard day because of her fatigue.
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ahrum

Nov 30th 2009 01:00

Thank you for your delicate corrections!! :)

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