The advantages of public transportation
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I wrote an essay about this theme before.
I rerwrote another essay on the same topic for practice.
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We cannot live in the society without public transportation.
There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of it.
Neverthelaee, in my opinion, the advantages of publictransportation exceed the disadvantages.
We often use public transportation although most of us have our own driver's licence and car.
The cost of public transportation is less expensive than driving a car.
To keep a car, we have to buy gasoline or other energy, and have it checked once in a while.
So, we tend to choose public transportation when we transfer a long distance.
In addition, we can trust the safty of public transportation.
If we drive a car or ride a bike, we must always be cautious not to cause a accident.
Furthermore, in these years, we are increasingly paying more attention t othe environment.
If we drive our own car respectively, more and more carbon dioxicide increase.
Most of us know that CO2 accelerate the global warming.
So, we tend not to use a car, and to use public transportation, like buses and trains instead.
Therefore、it is clear that public transportation has a lot of advantages in its convenience , economic, and eco-friendliness.
I rerwrote another essay on the same topic for practice.
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We cannot live in the society without public transportation.
There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of it.
Neverthelaee, in my opinion, the advantages of publictransportation exceed the disadvantages.
We often use public transportation although most of us have our own driver's licence and car.
The cost of public transportation is less expensive than driving a car.
To keep a car, we have to buy gasoline or other energy, and have it checked once in a while.
So, we tend to choose public transportation when we transfer a long distance.
In addition, we can trust the safty of public transportation.
If we drive a car or ride a bike, we must always be cautious not to cause a accident.
Furthermore, in these years, we are increasingly paying more attention t othe environment.
If we drive our own car respectively, more and more carbon dioxicide increase.
Most of us know that CO2 accelerate the global warming.
So, we tend not to use a car, and to use public transportation, like buses and trains instead.
Therefore、it is clear that public transportation has a lot of advantages in its convenience , economic, and eco-friendliness.

I re-wrote another essay on the same topic for practice.
We cannot live in this society without public transportation.
Nevertheless, in my opinion, the advantages of public transportation exceed the disadvantages.
We often use public transportation, although,most of us have our own driver's licence and car.
So, we tend to choose public transportation when we transfertravel a long distance.
In addition, we can trust the safety of public transportation.
If we drive a car or ride a bike, we must always be cautious not to cause an accident. (Generally, "a" is used when the next word starts with a consonant. 'an' is used when the next word starts with a vowel. Example: a car, a bike, a train, a cellphone--- an accident, an ion, an ear, an onion)
Furthermore, in these years, we are increasingly paying more attention to the environment.
If we drive our own car respectively, more and more carbon dioxide increase.(Different ways to write this sentence: 1) "If we drive our own cars, there is an increase in carbon dioxide production." 2) "If we drive our own cars, more and more carbon dioxide is released into the air." 3) "Respectively, if we drive our own cars, carbon dioxide increases.")
Most of us know that CO2 accelerates the global warming.
(should be connected to the previous sentence to look like this "Most of us know that CO2 accelerates global warning and, because of that, we tend not to use a car and use public transportation like buses and trains instead.")
Therefore, it is clear that public transportation has a lot of advantages in its convenience , economics, and eco-friendliness.
I prefer public transportation in almost all cases, but I dislike the high pricing, and the bad timing between busses sometimes.