I'd like you to give some advice for better writing.
Today, animals are essential for our lives.
As far as I concerned, it seems that the right of animal tend to be ignored.
We should reconsider how we live eith animals.
Zoo are said to help people, especially children, to learn how animals live.
But some people insist that zoos should be closed and let them like as they like.
They say it is pity for animals to live in such small space oly for human's entertainment.
From another viewpoint, the opinion that zoo protect animals by keeping some endangered species could be true.
So, we have some way to go to solve this matter.
The pet industry have grown in recent years.
Now, more and more people are starting to have their own pet.
But after a while, some of them are tired of bringing their pet up and in a worse case, they abondon them.
I think the pet industry tend to focus on selling animals and appealing in a good light.
We should consider animals are living creatures like human beings.
The fact that animals are often used in experiments before products like medicines , cosmetics and foods come out on the market is unknown to mose Japanese.
So, some organizations against using animal in experiment claim that we should confirm produce process of what we buy.
But we cannot avoid some experiments for our health and safety.
Companies should open the information of their products for consumers who mind using animal experiment.
Therefore, we should reconsider the role of animals.
They may be as our family, or may sometimes be tools for our lives.
There are many opinion, but we have to compromise to some extent.
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I wrote an essay on 'Does society give the rights of animals enough consideration?' I'd like you to give some advice for better writing. Today, animals are essential for our lives. As far as I concerned, it seems that the right of animal tend to be ignored. We should reconsider how we l