Practice of writing in English

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Jan 4, 2012 00:10
I can't go acorrs the rivier with the bridge broken.
橋が壊れいて、川を渡ることが出来ない。

↓I'm not sure if this sentence is correct.↓
この文が合っているかどうか分からない。

I should go on a diet with weight on my maid.
体重が気になるから、ダイエットした方がいい。

Sushi Smile
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 4, 2012 03:20
  • I can't go acorrs the rivier with the bridge broken.

  • I can't go across the rivier with the bridge broken.

 
  • I should go on a diet with weight on my maid.

  • I should go on a diet because my weight is on my mind.

 

Long time no see

Jan 4, 2012 18:00 Cranberry
Thank you for the corrections. Then..I'm late to say Happy New Year!
may you have many many more filled with health, happiness and success.
今年もどうぞよろしくお願い致します。(#^.^#)
Jack
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 11, 2012 11:43
  • I can't go acorrs the rivier with the bridge broken.

  • I can't go across the river with the bridge broken.

 

あなたの英語はいい！がんばって！

Jan 11, 2012 18:06 Cranberry
ありがとうございます！はい、がんばります。(＊＾▽＾＊）添削ありがとうございました。
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