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Which sentence is correct in grammatically?
Or, could you kindly give me much more appropriate sentence.
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彼はとても熱心にプレゼンテーションをしたので、それ以来、売り上げが倍増しました。
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He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have doubled since then.
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He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have since doubled.
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He handled the presentation enthusiastically that our sales have since doubled.
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He handled the presentation enthusiastically that our sales have doubled since then.
Thanks.=^-^=
Or, could you kindly give me much more appropriate sentence.
MP3
http://sdrv.ms/LFbDq4
彼はとても熱心にプレゼンテーションをしたので、それ以来、売り上げが倍増しました。
1
He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have doubled since then.
2
He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have since doubled.
3
He handled the presentation enthusiastically that our sales have since doubled.
4
He handled the presentation enthusiastically that our sales have doubled since then.
Thanks.=^-^=
Which sentence is grammatically correct?
Or, could you kindly give me a much more appropriate sentence.
He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have doubled since then.
Technically grammatically correct. but you would never say "enthusiastic enthusiasm" :P
He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have since doubled.
Same as last one.
He handled the presentation so enthusiastically that our sales have since doubled.
He handled the presentation so enthusiastically that our sales have doubled since then.
"Technically grammatically correct. but you would never say "enthusiastic enthusiasm" "
oh, I see=^-^=
Which sentence is grammatically correct?
Or(,) could you kindly give me a (much) more appropriate sentence.
The comma and "much" are a little unnatural.
He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have doubled since then.
He handled the presentation with such an enthusiastic enthusiasm that our sales have since doubled.
He handled the presentation so enthusiastically that our sales have since doubled.
He handled the presentation so enthusiastically that our sales have doubled since then.
Thanks!=^-^=
Which sentence is correct grammatically?
Or, could you kindly give me a much more appropriate sentence.
He handled the presentation with such enthusiasm that our sales have doubled since then.
If it is very intense, "overwhelming enthusiasm" is a suggestion.
He handled the presentation with such enthusiasm that our sales have since doubled.
I like this sentence the most.
He handled the presentation so enthusiastically that our sales have since doubled.
He handled the presentation so enthusiastically that our sales have doubled since then.
oh, I see!
So I should remember this one!