Hi, I really appreciate it if you would kindly correct my English writings.=^-^=
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This is my mobile phone. It has already passed five years since I bought. However, it still can shoot pretty good pictures and record videos, too. So, I don’t have to buy new smart phony until this one break. I know, iphone has gained huge popularity not only in USA but also all over the world. However in Japan, the hugest mobile phone carrier which called NTT DOCOMO has not yet deal with iphone. NTT has an extremely good and huge reception aria and I use this carrier for over 10 years. So, when my current phone break, I would probably going to buy Sony xperia. =^-^=
It has already been five years since I bought it.
So, I don’t have to buy a new smart phone until this one breaks.
I know that the iPhone has gained huge popularity not only in USA but also all over the world.
However, in Japan, the biggest mobile phone carrier, NTT DOCOMO, does not yet offer a deal with the iPhone.
NTT has an extremely good and huge reception area and I have used this carrier for over 10 years.
So, when my current phone breaks, I will probably buy a Sony xperia.
Nothing could convince me to switch to an iPhone!
Oh, you use Android not iPhone. My image of American, everybody using iPhone but I have no idea about the situation in UK. In your country, what the ratio of choosing Android Phone rather than the iPhone ? If you know that, please teach me.=^-^=
I think most of my friends have an Android phone and only 1 or 2 have an iPhone.
According to this, Android has a bigger market share than iPhone now! http://www.intomobile.com/2012/02/21/android-overtakes-iphone-uk/
It has already been passed five years since I bought it.
So, I don’t have to buy new smart phone until this one breaks.
I know, iPhone has gained huge popularity not only in USA but also all over the world.
However in Japan, the hugest mobile phone carrier which is called NTT DOCOMO has not yet dealt with the iPhone.
NTT has an extremely good and huge reception area and I use this carrier for over 10 years.
So, when my current phone breaks, I would probably going to buy Sony Xperia.
your cat look very elegant and beautiful=^-^=
Thank you for complimenting my cat! (^^)
It has already passed five years since I bought. "Five years have already passed since I bought it."
Just rearranged the sentence to sound better.
So, I don’t have to buy new smart phone until this one breaks.
However in Japan, the hugest mobile phone carrier which is called NTT DOCOMO has not yet made a deal with iphone.
NTT has an extremely good and huge reception area and I have used this carrier for over 10 years.
So, when my current phone breaks, I would probably going to buy the Sony xperia. or "I am probably going to buy the Sony xperia."
I added another way you could say the last part of the sentence.
NTT has an extremely wide coverage area, the call quality is good, and I have used/ have been using this carrier for over 10 years.
(In American English), "reception area" is called "coverage area". You can describe it with "huge", but I think "wide" might be more common. As for "call quality", if it is good it means that the sounds are clear and you don't have many dropped calls (the phone disconnects while you are still talking).
Usually in regards to signal: "I have no reception here in the countryside". "Reception area" or "coverage" would be fine too here I think.