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Advantages and disadvantages of fast food.
Nowadays people’s lives are becoming faster and faster. Because of that we want all the processes and procedures to be quicker, too. We have fast cars, fast computers, fast relationships and fast food. So is fast food really good for our speedy lives?
On the one hand, sometimes people have no time to cook, so they have no other choice then going and buying fast food. This saves time to many people every day, which is convenient (they can buy fast food wherever they go, so there is no need to search for a place to have a snack). What is more, this type of food is usually cheap enough to be affordable for many people. Plus our bodies need a balanced diet: we need some fats, sugars and salt. There are enough of these components in fast food.
On the other hand, this fast life is killing our bodies. When we eat fast food, we get large amounts of additives, which are full of saturated fats and other chemicals. Secondly, food should make us feel better, but fast food doesn’t provide you with vitamins and minerals, which your body needs. And finally, it is often said in mass media, that some fast food is cooked in conditions of bad hygiene.
To sum up, I would like to say that fast food is a very interesting experiment of the humanity, which has a lot of advantages, but we should not overuse it unless we want to damage our health. Sometimes I eat fast food, but it must not be a part of someone’s every day routine.
Advantages and disadvantages of fast food.
Nowadays people’s lives are becoming faster and faster. Because of that we want all the processes and procedures to be quicker, too. We have fast cars, fast computers, fast relationships and fast food. So is fast food really good for our speedy lives?
On the one hand, sometimes people have no time to cook, so they have no other choice then going and buying fast food. This saves time to many people every day, which is convenient (they can buy fast food wherever they go, so there is no need to search for a place to have a snack). What is more, this type of food is usually cheap enough to be affordable for many people. Plus our bodies need a balanced diet: we need some fats, sugars and salt. There are enough of these components in fast food.
On the other hand, this fast life is killing our bodies. When we eat fast food, we get large amounts of additives, which are full of saturated fats and other chemicals. Secondly, food should make us feel better, but fast food doesn’t provide you with vitamins and minerals, which your body needs. And finally, it is often said in mass media, that some fast food is cooked in conditions of bad hygiene.
To sum up, I would like to say that fast food is a very interesting experiment of the humanity, which has a lot of advantages, but we should not overuse it unless we want to damage our health. Sometimes I eat fast food, but it must not be a part of someone’s every day routine.
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This is my first time to write here...
I'd like to get some help with my English homework...
Could you check it, please?...
Nowadays, people’s lives / lifestyles are becoming faster and faster.
As a result, we want all the processes and procedures to be quicker, too.
We have fast cars, fast computers, fast relationships, and fast food.
Can fast food really be good for our speedy lives? try to avoid beginning sentences with "So / But / And"
On the one hand, sometimes people do not have to cook, so they have no choice other than going out and buying fast food. "people have no time to cook" is fine for colloquial language
This saves time for many people every day, which is convenient (they can buy fast food wherever they go, so there is no need to search for a place (in order) to have a snack).
What's more / Moreover, this type of food is usually cheap enough to be affordable for many people. "What is more" is fine, but "What's more" is more commonly used
Plus, our bodies need a balanced diet: we need some fats, sugars and salt.
When we eat fast food, we take in / consume a large amount of additives, which are full of saturated fats and other chemicals.
Additionally, food should make us feel better, but fast food doesn’t provide you with the vitamins and minerals which your body needs.
Finally, it is often said in mass media that some fast foods are cooked / prepared in unsanitary conditions.
To sum (it) up, I would like to say that fast food is a very interesting experiment for the humanity. It has a lot of advantages, but we should not abuse them unless we want to damage our health.
Sometimes I eat fast food, but it must not be a part of anyone's daily routine.
Excellent!!
~~connfucius
This is my first time to write here...
I'd like to get some help with my english homework...
Could you correct it, please?...
Nowadays people’s lives are becoming more busier.
Because of that we want all our processes and procedures to be quicker too.
On the one hand, sometimes people have no time to cook, so they have no other choice than to go and buy fast food.
This saves time for many people every day, which is convenient (they can buy fast food wherever they go, so there is no need to search for a place to have a snack).
Plus our bodies needs a balanced diet; we need fat, sugar and salt.
On the other hand, this fast living is killing our bodies.
When we eat fast food we also get large amounts of additives, which are full of saturated fats and other chemicals.
Secondly, food should make us feel better, but fast food doesn’t provide us with vitamins and minerals, which our bodies needs.
And finally, as is often reported in mass media, some fast foods are cooked in bad hygienic conditions.
To sum up (In summary), I would like to say that fast food is one of humanities very interesting experiments, which has a lot of advantages, but we should not overuse it unless we will damage our health.
Sometimes I eat fast food, but it must not be a part of someone’s everyday routine.
This is my first time writing here
Nowadays people’s lives are becoming faster and faster._______________This is fine
Because of that, we want all the processes and procedures to be quicker, too.__________________Apart from the missing comma, this is fine
So is fast food really good for our speedy lives?___________________Perfectly good English
On the one hand, sometimes people have no time to cook, so they have no other choice than going and buying fast food.
This saves time for many people every day, which is convenient (they can buy fast food wherever they go, so there is no need to search for a place to have a snack).
What is more, this type of food is usually cheap enough to be affordable for many people._________Perfectly fine.
Plus our bodies need a balanced diet - we need some fats, sugars and salt.________________________Colons and semi colons should always be avoided.
On the other hand, our fast life is killing our bodies._______________________THIS is fine
When we eat fast food, we get large amounts of additives, which are full of saturated fats and other chemicals._________________________Fine
Secondly, food should make us feel better, but fast food doesn’t provide you with vitamins and minerals, which your body needs.__________________________Again, this is fine
And finally, it is often said in mass media, that some fast food is cooked in conditions of bad hygiene._____________No problems here
To sum up, I would like to say that fast food is a very interesting experiment one of the humanity's very interesting experiments , which has a lot of advantages, but we should not overuse it unless we want to damage our health.