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Jul 10th 2012 01:57
Today, I had a day-off.
So I had a lot of errands to run today,
Studying English, using some softwares of new company where I will work from september, and I wanted to watch the movie I recorded before.
But I couldn't make use of my time as much as I imaged.

I always wonder why it's hard to spend time during dayoff.
I feel like I can ues my time effectually at workday rather than day-off.
Ms. H
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 10th 2012 03:11
  • Day-off passes soon.

  • My Day Off From Work Goes By Too Quickly!

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Today, I had a day-off.

  • Today I finally have a day off.

 
  • So I had a lot of errands to run today,

  • I have a lot of errands to run today.

 
  • Studying English, using some softwares of new company where I will work from september, and I wanted to watch the movie I recorded before.

  • There are so many things I need to do. I need to study English and work on software for my upcoming job in September. I also want to watch the movie that I prerecorded.

 
  • But I couldn't make use of my time as much as I imaged.

  • I am disappointed because I didn't make the best use of my time.

 
  • I always wonder why it's hard to spend time during dayoff.

  • I wonder why it is so hard for me to know how to spend my time on my day off.

 
  • I feel like I can ues my time effectually at workday rather than day-off.

  • I feel like I spend my time at work more effectively than I do when it is my day off.

 
Umaibo, your sentence structure is good. You added a couple of hypens (-) in the word "day-off" that are unnecessary. I like how you listed the errands you need to accomplish on your day off and how you feel like you have a hard time figuring out how to spend the time on your day off. Your use of the word "effectively" is great when you said you feel like you spend your time at work more effectively than you do on your day off. I think that most of us feel this way about work days and days off.

Ms. H (from Omaha, Nebraska) (USA)
Jul 20th 2012 10:33 umaibo
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