Jun 01st 2009 21:24
CJK
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Review of TOEIC on 5/31: Pa...
Bah_Dure - why the de-capitalization of "however"? It's the start of a new sentence....
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Bah_Dure - why the de-capitalization of "however"? It's the start of a new sentence....
Jun 01st 2009 16:14
Bah_Dure
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Review of TOEIC on 5/31: Pa...
Kazuhikoさん、こんにちは すごいです~!今回の日記はお話みたいなものです。読みながら、興奮しています。次にどうなるでしょうか?(^-^) (Awesome! Your entry today was just like a story. As I was r...
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Kazuhikoさん、こんにちは すごいです~!今回の日記はお話みたいなものです。読みながら、興奮しています。次にどうなるでしょうか?(^-^) (Awesome! Your entry today was just like a story. As I was r...
A nice piece of English and I hope that you receive the grade that you want. My comments are really suggestions here as the passage read ...