The first thing I remenber is .......( This is my homework)

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Apr 2, 2014 04:24
The first thing I remember is when I was kid I couldn't jump from the fence whose high was 130cm.
私が最初に覚えているのは子供の頃約、１３０ｃｍの塀を飛べなかった事
All of children could but I couldn't
子供達皆が出来るのに私は出来なかった。
I tried to do many times but I wasn't successful evey times.
何度も試みたがその度に成功しなかった。
I though why what everybody could I couldn't I remenber.
何故皆が出来る事ができないんと考えた事を覚えてる
By the way, when I joined to walk in the pool, I did very slowly.
ところで、水中歩行に参加してた時すごく遅い。
Every member had to wait for a little bit long until I finished
皆は私が終わるのを少しの間待たねばいけなかった。
That's why I quit the swimimg pool.
そういうわけで水泳教室を止めた。
The things is the same now.
今も状態はいっしょ。
Isjaki
Apr 2, 2014 06:47
  • The first thing I remember is when I was kid I couldn't jump from the fence whose high was 130cm.

  • The first thing I remember from when I was a kid is that I couldn't jump over a fence that was 130cm tall.

 
  • All of children could but I couldn't

  • All of the children could, but I couldn't

 
  • I tried to do many times but I wasn't successful evey times.

  • I tried to do it many times, but I wasn't successful.

 
  • I though why what everybody could I couldn't I remenber.

  • I thought, "Everybody else can do this, why can't I?".

 
  • By the way, when I joined to walk in the pool, I did very slowly.

  • By the way, when I started swimming in the pool, I did so very slowly.

 
  • Every member had to wait for a little bit long until I finished

  • Everyone had to wait for a little while until I finished

 
  • That's why I quit the swimimg pool.

  • That's why I quit my swimming lessons.

 
  • The things is the same now.

  • Things are the same even now.

 
Thank you for your correction!
Vermilion
Apr 2, 2014 13:03
  • The first thing I remember is when I was kid I couldn't jump from the fence whose high was 130cm.

  • I still remember that when I was a kid, I couldn't jump from the fence that was 130 cm. high.

    I think this is more natural.

 
  • All of children could but I couldn't

  • All of children made it but I couldn't

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Apr 4, 2014 10:41 masako
  • ありがとうございます。２，３日コンヒュターを開ける暇がなくお礼が遅くなり済みません。

 
Apr 4, 2014 11:20 Vermilion
  • どういたしまして。
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The first thing I remember is when I was kid I couldn't jump from the fence whose high was 130cm. 私が最初に覚えているのは子供の頃約、１３０ｃｍの塀を飛べなかった事 All of children could but I couldn't 子供達皆が出来るのに私は出来なかった。 I t


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