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Feb 26, 2014 02:49
This is my homework. The title is when are you visiting to next your holiday?
I often watch traveing program on t, v, I like this. I would like to visit many places. It's difficult to choose the place. It may be an improper expression,
強いて言うならば
I'm going to travel to along the Black sea and the Caspian Sea in which around countries was ruled by the Soviet Union pass the time and also, Russia, Ukraine Turket and etc.
黒海 ,カスピ海沿いの過去にソビエト連邦に支配されてた国 又ロシア、ウクライナ、トルコ等。
I won't be a visiter but I will spend the time usual as a local people.
旅人としてではなく、現地の人として普通の時間を過ごしたい。
I will experience a lot of things as a local people. While I'm writing this, a lot of attractive places are coming up my mind. My imagination is getting extend.
これを書いてる間も魅力的な場所が浮かんでくる。イメージが拡がる。
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Vermilion
Feb 26, 2014 11:22
  • The title is when are you visiting to next your holiday?

  • The title is "Where are you visiting next your holiday?

 
  • I often watch traveing program on t, v, I like this.

  • I often watch a travel program on TV and I like this.

 
  • It's difficult to choose the place.

  • It's difficult to choose a place.

 
  • It may be an improper expression,

  • It may be an improper expression.

 
  • I'm going to travel to along the Black sea and the Caspian Sea in which around countries was ruled by the Soviet Union pass the time and also, Russia, Ukraine Turket and etc.

  • I want to go to the countries along the Black sea and the Caspian Sea that were ruled by the Soviet Union before, and also, Russia, Ukraine Turkey, etc.

 
  • I won't be a visiter but I will spend the time usual as a local people.

  • I won't be a visitor but I will spend the usual time as a local person.

 
  • I will experience a lot of things as a local people.

  • I will experience a lot of things as a local person.

 
  • My imagination is getting extend.

  • I can extend my imagination.

 

I hope some of the corrections can help you.

Thank you for your correction!

 
Feb 27, 2014 00:13 masako
  • Thanks a lot, you are always there beside me.

 
Feb 27, 2014 00:14 Vermilion
  • You're welcome!
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