Do you like sweets?

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Mar 3, 2014 01:35
Do you like sweets? Ｉ like.
甘いのは好きですか？私は好きです。
I would always stop to eat chocolate but I can't.
いつもチョコレートを食べるのを止めようと思うがやめられない。
When I saw a gabage box, I was surprised. There were a lot of variety colors of chocolate paper.
ゴミ箱を見た時驚く。そこには色とりどりノチョコレート紙が沢山ある
Yesterday, I didn't eating sweets instead of seaweed and an apple. I'm wondering how many days I can't stop to eat sweets.
昨日はあまい物　を食べる代わりに海草とリンゴを食べた。何日間食べるのをやめれるのだろう。
Laughing Monkey ESL Dojo
Mar 3, 2014 11:52
  • Do you like sweets?
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • Ｉ like.

  • Ｉ likedo.

 
  • I would always stop to eat chocolate but I can't.

  • I would always stry top stop eating chocolate, but I can't.

    A little chocolate is good for you.

 
  • When I saw a gabage box, I was surprised.

  • When I saw a box of papers in a pile of garbage box, I was surprised.

 
  • There were a lot of variety colors of chocolate paper.

  • There were a lot of wrvappring paperty fcolors of chocolates in pa varipety of colors.

 
  • Yesterday, I didn't eating sweets instead of seaweed and an apple.

  • Yesterday, I didn't eat ainyg sweets. Iinstead Iof ate dried seaweed and an apple.

 
  • I'm wondering how many days I can't stop to eat sweets.

  • I'm wondering, how many days I can't stdop witho eaut sweets.?

 

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Do you like sweets? Ｉ like. 甘いのは好きですか？私は好きです。 I would always stop to eat chocolate but I can't. いつもチョコレートを食べるのを止めようと思うがやめられない。 When I saw a gabage box, I was surprised. There were a lot of variety co


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