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Dec 19, 2011 21:10
Almost our news were about Kim Jong-il today.Another big new is that the U.S force evacuated from Iraq today.
North Korian's news is the bigest for our country but in the world, the U.S news is a biger than North Korian news ?In the morning that news were great treated but until from in the after noon, all news programs have been broacasting North Korian . After that the coutry is how to change and our country is gotten effective from North Korea and so on.
tneva82
Dec 19, 2011 21:15
  • Almost our news were about Kim Jong-il today.

  • Almost all of our news were about Kim Jong-il today.

 
  • S force evacuated from Iraq today.

  • S force evacuated from Iraq today. (I don't think evacuated has right feel for the phrase. It indicates they were being driven away. I would use "left Iraq" today because as far as I know it was planned departure, not because they couldn't maintain position there)

 
  • North Korian's news is the bigest for our country but in the world, the U.

  • North Korean's news is the biggest news for our country but in the world, the U.

 
  • S news is a biger than North Korian news ?In the morning that news were great treated but until from in the after noon, all news programs have been broacasting North Korian .

  • S news is a bigger than North Korean news ?(is previous sentence supposed to be question? If so add "is" after the "but in the world") In the morning that news were great treated but until from in the after noon, all news programs have been broacasting North Korian . (not sure what you are trying to say here :-/)

 

Dec 19, 2011 21:48 masako
Thank you for your corrected. I wanted to say that I heard news about the U.S will leav Iraq in the morning but All of news I head is about North Korean's news from in the afternoon.
意味は伝わりませんか？

Dec 19, 2011 22:50 tneva82
Well I didn't quite get it but now that you explained it further it makes more sense. "In the morning news were all about U.S leaving Iraq but since afternoon all I heard was about situation in the North Korea". Right?

Dec 20, 2011 00:15 masako
はい、そうです。ありがとうございます。
Abby
Dec 30, 2011 01:15
  • Almost our news were about Kim Jong-il today.

  • Almost our news were about Kim Jong-il today.Almost all of our news was about Kim Jong-il today.

 
  • S force evacuated from Iraq today.

  • S force evacuated from Iraq today.More big news- The U.S. left Iraq today.

 
  • S news is a biger than North Korian news ?In the morning that news were great treated but until from in the after noon, all news programs have been broacasting North Korian .

  • S news is a biger than North Korian news ?In the morning that news were great treated but until from in the after noon, all news programs have been broacasting North Korian .North Korea's news is the biggest news for our country, but in the world, the U.S's news is bigger than North korea's news.

 
  • After that the coutry is how to change and our country is gotten effective from North Korea and so on.

  • After that the coutry is how to change and our country is gotten effective from North Korea and so on.After that, the country will change, and our country will be effected by North Korea and so on.

 

Hi masako! nice entry :) we haven't talked in a while, how are you? i'm fine. I'll write another entry soon.

Dec 30, 2011 13:33 masako
Thank you for your correcting .I want to tell you the site of Japanese mononoke. Do you know that ?
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Japanese-mononoke-stories-Chimi-Chimi-KAIKAI/159067144156757mononoke means evul spirit.The pictures are cute and stories are funny.I hope you enjoy that.

Dec 30, 2011 23:41 Abby
thanks masako! looks fun :)

Dec 31, 2011 15:11 masako
I sent you New year greeting card on skype. That is Japanese style. Please show that one. I would like to use this site but I don't know how to way.

Jan 1, 2012 02:44 Abby
thank you :) when i come on skype i will see it :)
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