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Nov 04th 2009 14:45

These last months I started a swimming class and I am enjoying it so much. I feel I should have done that before , at the beginning I went twice a week and now I go 5 five days a week.

Always that I am practicing a sport I focus on keeping a healthy life style, now I want to start changing some habits while I eat, something that kills me is the way I eat at work. Always eating in a hurry doesn't help, fast food is not and option.

So now more than a diet I am looking to keep a healthy life stile carrying on with my swimming classes, adding some more exercises during the morning and eating a lot more healthier.

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gilablue

Nov 05th 2009 00:35

Arrow_31_dummyThese last months I started a swimming class and I am enjoying it so much.
Arrow_31These last months I started a swimming class and I am enjoying it so much.These last few months I have been taking a swimming class and I am enjoying it so much.
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Arrow_31_dummyI feel I should have done that before , at the beginning I went twice a week and now I go 5 five days a week.
Arrow_31I realized I should have started earlier; at the beginning I went twice a week and now I go 5 five days a week.-This sentence wasn't wrong, but this sounds better. 
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Arrow_31_dummyAlways that I am practicing a sport I focus on keeping a healthy life style, now I want to start changing some habits while I eat, something that kills me is the way I eat at work.
Arrow_31When I am practicing a sport I focus on keeping a healthy life style. I want would like to start changing some of my eating habits while I eat; something that kills me is the way I eat at work kills me.-I think this sentence is grammatically correct, but it was phrased in a way that you do not hear (or rarely hear) in English. Also, in English sentences can not run on as long as they do in Spanish. I have added periods and semicolons where necessary. 
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Arrow_31_dummyAlways eating in a hurry doesn't help, fast food is not and option.
Arrow_31Always eating in a hurry doesn't help, fast food is not and option.It does not help that I always eat in a hurry. Because I want to start focusing on eating healthy fast food is no longer an option. - Are you saying that fast food is not an option anymore because you want to keep a healthy lifestyle or that you eat in a hurry but do not eat fast food? I assumed the first because that seemed to make the most sense in context. 
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Arrow_31_dummySo now more than a diet I am looking to keep a healthy life stile carrying on with my swimming classes, adding some more exercises during the morning and eating a lot more healthier.
Arrow_31So now more than a diet I am looking to keep a healthy life stile carrying on with my swimming classes, adding some more exercises during the morning and eating a lot more healthier.However, I am trying to keep a healthy life style that is more than just a change in diet. I am continuing with my swimming classes, but adding some more exercises during the morning and eating a lot more healthier.-I changed the order of the first sentence, same situation as above.
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