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A Star inside a glass.

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May 29th 2011 06:15
I was in a garten of a villas party. It was San Lorenzo the night of the falling stars.
Everybody was looking the black sky while i was looking my trasparent glass. I found a Stern in my glass or maybe it was a candle behind it. Anyway i took the glass and i trunk a star. It has no flavor.
I wished me something, which i forget. The people around me, they had everything but they found always something to desire. One star more. They steal me all the stars so i trunk a star.
Justin
Jun 02nd 2011 09:17
  • I was in a garten of a villas party.

  • I was in the garden of a villas at a house(?) party.

 
  • It was San Lorenzo the night of the falling stars.

  • It was the Feast of San Lorenzo, the night of the falling stars.

 
  • Everybody was looking the black sky while i was looking my trasparent glass.

  • Everybody was looking at the black sky while i was looking at my trasparent glass. (I think the glass can be assumed to be "transparent", although I think "translucent" would be a better word to use.)

 
  • I found a Stern in my glass or maybe it was a candle behind it.

  • I found a star in my glass, or maybe it was a candle behind it.

 
  • Anyway i took the glass and i trunk a star.

  • Anyway, i took the glass and i drank a star.

 
  • It has no flavor.

  • It had no flavor.

 
  • I wished me something, which i forget.

  • I wished me for something, which i forget.

 
  • The people around me, they had everything but they found always something to desire.

  • The people around me, they had everything, but they always found something more to desire.

 
  • They steal me all the stars so i trunk a star.

  • They steal from me all the stars, so i drank a star instead.

 
Jul 13th 2011 00:45 Homi
I expect that you have a great talent of poets. I can see it from your English. Your word choice is so beautiful and I can picture a beautiful scene from your words. Thank you for a great diary.
NotteDiurna
Jun 02nd 2011 19:46
Grazie:=)
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I was in a garten of a villas party. It was San Lorenzo the night of the falling stars. Everybody was looking the black sky while i was looking my trasparent glass. I found a Stern in my glass or maybe it was a candle behind it. Anyway i took the glass and i trunk a star. It has no flavor. I wished


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