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Please correct my essay because of toefl test this week.

Please correct my essay because of toefl test this week. From old times, there is a dispute that is it better whether to have a few ...
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Aug 18, 2014 18:45
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Please correct my answer.

Please correct my answer. I agree with the view that the government should require all young adults to perform some kind of nationa...
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Aug 1, 2014 17:50
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Please correct my essay of TOEFL ibt.

Please correct my essay of TOEFL ibt. Some people like to be with friends most of the time. However, I prefer to spend most of their ...
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May 15, 2014 22:51
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Please correct my essay.

Please correct my essay. I agree with the view that Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon a...
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Apr 12, 2014 22:58
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I agree the idea that friends are the most important influence on young adults.

I agree the idea that friends are the most important influence on young adults. There are two reasons. First, our friends have impact o...
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Mar 31, 2014 23:18
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