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I'm in the middle of practicing translation.
I'll be happy if you touch up my works.
I ask for your kind cooperation.


[過去の翻訳]

ビーとパピーキャット (パイロット版) → http://goo.gl/nbLsNP
ビーとパピーキャット 第01話 → http://goo.gl/f3GVhO
ビーとパピーキャット 第02話 → http://goo.gl/tgyTec
ビーとパピーキャット 第03話 → http://goo.gl/5i12a6
ビーとパピーキャット 第04話 → http://goo.gl/Vq9bxO

宇宙防衛隊 第01話 → http://goo.gl/TFXaQZ
宇宙防衛隊 第02話 → http://goo.gl/ltRn1B
宇宙防衛隊 第03話 → http://goo.gl/89jpYR
宇宙防衛隊 第04話 → http://goo.gl/c6MZns
宇宙防衛隊 第05話 → http://goo.gl/Spt4we
宇宙防衛隊 第06話 → http://goo.gl/Qp0849
宇宙防衛隊 第07話 → http://goo.gl/Sw4eux
宇宙防衛隊 第08話 → http://goo.gl/xNRIEk
宇宙防衛隊 第09話 → http://goo.gl/izKR0u
宇宙防衛隊 第10話 → http://goo.gl/JQwQXm
宇宙防衛隊 第11話 → http://goo.gl/cFiYOJ
宇宙防衛隊 短編その1 → http://goo.gl/30Ca3W
宇宙防衛隊 短編その2 → http://goo.gl/qhbEQs
宇宙防衛隊 短編その3 → http://goo.gl/I5ylXn
宇宙防衛隊 短編その4 → http://goo.gl/RXb4rI
宇宙防衛隊 短編その5 → http://goo.gl/6SyRtS
宇宙防衛隊2 第01話 → http://goo.gl/hthHgv
宇宙防衛隊2 第02話 → http://goo.gl/Y4TqAs
宇宙防衛隊2 第03話 → http://goo.gl/j6Hqng
宇宙防衛隊2 第04話 → http://goo.gl/CAJ6UW
宇宙防衛隊2 第05話 → http://goo.gl/ZPWdmp
宇宙防衛隊2 第06話 → http://goo.gl/t2ON90
宇宙防衛隊2 第07話 → http://goo.gl/42VmCF
宇宙防衛隊2 第08話 → http://goo.gl/AK4wXx
宇宙防衛隊2 第09話 → http://goo.gl/vHhc0A
宇宙防衛隊2 第10話 → http://goo.gl/Lygohx
宇宙防衛隊2 第11話 → http://goo.gl/51s5jq
宇宙防衛隊2 第12話 → http://goo.gl/1oLJoR

[Transcribing]
British Gas Rampage → http://goo.gl/WcCS9b
Raw Craft with Anthony Bourdain Ep.1 → http://goo.gl/grN6Jf
Raw Craft with Anthony Bourdain Ep.2 → http://goo.gl/XWmPwy
Raw Craft with Anthony Bourdain Ep.3 → http://goo.gl/wlLHIr
Raw Craft with Anthony Bourdain Ep.4 → http://goo.gl/29tmBj
Raw Craft with Anthony Bourdain Ep.5 → http://goo.gl/zin24M

[Parodies]
Bravest Warriors Ep.1 → http://goo.gl/HgB6mw
Bravest Warriors Ep.2 → http://goo.gl/rkFGsZ
Bravest Warriors Ep.3 → http://goo.gl/mBCQpm
Bravest Warriors Ep.4 → http://goo.gl/2IxVrb
Bravest Warriors Ep.9 → http://goo.gl/FdVh5n
Bravest Warriors S2-Ep.1 → http://goo.gl/xQubre http://goo.gl/Umqki9
Bravest Warriors S2-Ep.2 → http://goo.gl/qiIIJx
Bravest Warriors S2-Ep.4 → http://goo.gl/qx7zj6
Bravest Warriors S2-Ep.5 → http://goo.gl/XW7qdP
Bee and PuppyCat Ep.4 → http://goo.gl/6QF9LG

[My impressions]
Bravest Warriors Ep.5 → http://goo.gl/XLOhLr
Bravest Warriors S2-Ep.3 → http://goo.gl/QixuP1
Bravest Warriors S2-Ep.6 → http://goo.gl/jrp8IQ
Bee and PuppyCat Ep.4 → http://goo.gl/x1eM1o



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I tried to explain about Japanese grammar in the following entries.
Please use them as a reference.

Basic Japanese Grammar
http://goo.gl/PXQEYr

将来 vs 未来
http://goo.gl/hM4mjA

今度 vs 今回
http://goo.gl/MIHQsX

よ vs ね vs よね
http://goo.gl/hFaw9M

始めまして vs 初めまして
http://goo.gl/P5P7nT

に vs は vs には
http://goo.gl/II05uY
http://goo.gl/byJPlv

は vs が
http://goo.gl/Ccv5cB

に vs へ
http://goo.gl/yNde30

~たら vs ~時
http://goo.gl/ULvhX3

と vs ば vs たら vs なら
http://goo.gl/pwGUr2

時 vs 頃
http://goo.gl/1STro4

学ぶ vs 習う vs 練習する
http://goo.gl/qQkx6B

嬉しい vs 楽しい
http://goo.gl/Zam1qI

経験 vs 体験
http://goo.gl/Jmg4CE

寝る vs 眠る
http://goo.gl/EtYq0g

<== Notice ==>


Regardless of whether these sentences are grammatically correct, I'd like to know if there are any ways to express myself more naturally. Please feel free to tell me if you have any suggestions.
私の訳文の意味が通ったとしても、あなた好みの文章や、より自然な文章に書き換えてくれると嬉しいです。

Also, I would ask you to click on the "Good" and "Perfect" buttons because I'd like to know which translations are better.
それから、どの訳に人気があるのか知りたいので、「Good」や「Perfect」のボタンをなるべく押してほしいです。

If you have two ways of rephrasing this sentence, would you please write them in two separate comments/post?
言い換えたい文章が、二種類ある場合は、二回に分けて投稿してください。

It doesn't matter even if you post multiple times.
何回、投稿してくれても、かまいません。

For correction of mistakes, please change the font color to red.
「間違いの訂正」の場合は、「赤」に色を変えてください。

Please change the font color to blue, for word suggestions.
「言葉の言い換え」の場合は、「青」に色を変えてください。

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