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joshua.mamouney
  • It is hard to imagine that someone can grow up healthily if they live in a family that is dominated with dispute and even violence, or if they have a drunk father or a gambling mother, not to mention the difficulties that he has to be successful in his study or career compared to others who are living a family that is filled with love.
  • It is hard to imagine that someone can grow up healthily if they live in a family that is dominated with by dispute and even violence, or if they have a drunk father or a gambling mother, not to mention the difficulties that he has to overcome in order to be successful in his study or career compared to others who are living live in a family that is filled with love.
  • I added the words "to overcome in order" to make it easier to understand what you mean.

Jun 25, 2013 14:55 Public 0624-2 Luck
AL-CID
  • The failure reasons is complex, it may be the methods he uses are not optimized or it may be the direction he chooses is not clear, but the reason could also be the luck he lacks.
  • The failure reasons is reasons for failure are complex. It may be that the methods he uses are not optimized, or it may be that the direction he chooses is not clear. but However, the reason could also be the luck he lacks that he lacks the luck.
  • Although your use of 'he' is correct, it would be better to replace them with 'one' to create a broader sense and generalization. When you use 'he' in this context, it makes it seem like you're talking about a specific person.

Jun 25, 2013 14:50 Public 0624-01 Luck
fat1fared
你的英文总是很完美。 :) 我不同意,我倒是相信男人跟女人应该treated equality。有的很大的男人可能喜欢做衣服,有的女生说不定享受logging,社会不可以告诉他们,他们不能。 我的外婆是七十岁,她依然开公共汽车,我的最好男的朋友照顾猫。 每一个人都是individual,所以社会一定treat them as such.

Jun 25, 2013 12:02 Public It is undeniable that men a...
fat1fared
  • For instance: men may perform better in certain work that requires more physical strength and higher pace, while women may do better that requires more patience and carefulness.
  • For instance: many men may perform better in the areas of work that require more physical strength and speed, while women may do better in areas that require more patience and care.
  • 因为男人不都做辛苦的工作,做得很好,所以需要写'many'。

Jun 25, 2013 12:02 Public It is undeniable that men a...
fat1fared
  • We cannot image that ask some girls who are skinny figures to go to the forest, carrying axes and doing logging jobs, on the other hand, ask some men who are strong with full of muscle to stay at tailor shops, holding a needle in one hand and doing sewing work.
  • I cannot image that asking girls with skinny figures to go into a forest with axes to do logging; jobs, furthermore, it seems ridiculous to ask strong and muscular men to work in a tailor's shop, where they would have to use needles and sew.
  • on the other hand意思‘但是’ furthermore ‘而且/并且/再加上 In this context: with=有 可以说“girls who have skinny figures' 你也可以说‘girls who are skinny’ (没有figures) 虽然Skinny是形容词,可是figures and girls,两个都是名词,Skinny只可以modify一个名词,不能modify两个名词,因此,你有girl 和 figure,skinny modifies figure,不modifies girl。懂不懂?

Jun 25, 2013 12:02 Public It is undeniable that men a...
Sakodija
  • From witnessing various wild animals lively, we can be better aware of the wonder of natural world.
  • From witnessing various wild animals live, we can become more aware of the wonder of natural world.
  • "Lively" - is an adjective and it's wrong in your case. When you want to say something about watching it "in real life" you use the word "Live" instead of "Lively". Example: "Get to see wild animals live". The word "Live" has 2 different pronunciations that make it a bit difficult to explain. 1. Live - it is read as "lɪv" and it is a verb. Also there is another pronunciation: 2. Live - you pronounce it "laɪv", but it is written exactly the same like before and it also has a different meaning. Since your English is great, you should have no problems and you should check out this link for more detailed explanations about this word: http://www.thefreedictionary.com/live

Jun 24, 2013 15:00 Public 0621-4 Zoos
Sakodija
  • Predators may be one reason, but more importantly, because of humans who keep in harvesting parts of their bodies for making profits.
  • Predators may be one of the reasons, but more importantly, humans who keep in harvesting parts of their bodies for making profits poses the biggest threat.
  • It's not clear from your sentence what is the reason/thing that humans do, that is similar to what predators are doing. You could also write it like this: "Predators may be one of the reasons." And after that: "Another (serious) threat exists because of humans who keep in harvesting parts of their bodies for making profits."

Jun 24, 2013 14:56 Public 0621-3 Zoos
Treehugger
  • It is undoubted that we all hope that all animals can live in their natural habitats, however, under current situations, it is impossible to put them back into the nature, especially for certain endangered species.
  • It is undoubted that we all hope that all animals can live in their natural habitats, however, under current circumstances, it is sometimes impossible to return them to the nature, especially for certain endangered species.

Jun 24, 2013 14:32 Public 0621-05 Zoos
Treehugger
  • With the development of society and the economy across the world
  • With the development of society and the economy across the world
  • The reason I dislike "across the world" here is because the phrase usually means a multiple of things, or multiple facets of one thing. E.g. ① There are many types of frog across the world. ② Italian cuisine across the world varies from country to country. However, "society" and "economy" are singular concepts, single parts of the world.

Jun 20, 2013 20:36 Public Anybody can do me a favor...

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