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Tom
  • A web of information sticks us within it.
  • A web of information sticks snares/traps/snarls us within it.

Sep 18, 2013 10:40 Public 3 - Technology
Tom
  • The advancement continues to nowadays, computer are rolling into homes, playing un-substitute role in providing efficient support.
  • The advancement continues to nowadays, as computers are roll into homes, playing un-substitute roles for in providing efficient support.
  • If something "continues," it includes today, so you need not add "nowadays" after "continues."

Sep 18, 2013 10:31 Public 3 - Technology
fat1fared
  • Because most of our time is devoted to keep informed with news, but most of them are immaterial; chat online with friends, but few of them are real friends; do lots of things, but no reason to do them.
  • Because Most of our time is devoted to keeping up-to-date informed with the news, regardless of how immaterial it may be; chatting online with friends, even though few of them are real friends; and doing many things that we have no reason to do.

Sep 16, 2013 11:18 Public 2-Technology
Hojo4o9
My version (tell me if this makes sense): In summary, people are limited in their ability to effect an outcome which ultimately depends on luck. However, we can try our best to do everything in our power to at least swing the odds in ...

Jul 18, 2013 21:53 Public 0710-5
Khianamh
  • However, we can try our best to do what we can do so that at least the outcome can be in our favor.
  • However, we can try our best to do what we can do so that the outcome at least can be in our favor.
  • It makes more sense to put the emphasis on the outcome "the outcome at least" rather than the outcome from a list of possible options "at least the outcome"

Jul 18, 2013 21:50 Public 0710-5
George
  • To sum up, people are limited in their ability to make everything happens in the way, which only can depend on luck.
  • To sum up, people are limited in their ability to make everything happen since some of it only depends on luck.

Jul 18, 2013 21:45 Public 0710-5
Khianamh
  • It is unadvisable to simply emphasize the factor of luck to a level that ignores other more important ones such as efforts and gives up the opportunities of success.
  • It is inadvisable to simply emphasize the factor of luck to a level that ignores other, more important ones, such as efforts and gives up the opportunity of success.

Jul 18, 2013 21:28 Public 0710-4
icepatton
  • It is unadvisable to simply emphasize the factor of luck to a level that ignores other more important ones such as efforts and gives up the opportunities of success.
  • It is inadvisable to simply emphasize the factor of luck at the expense of other more important ones, such as efforts, because then one could gives up on opportunities of success.

Jul 18, 2013 21:27 Public 0710-4
Khianamh
  • For example, we want to conduct an outdoor activity but we need to get acceptance from weather.
  • For example, we want to conduct an outdoor activity but we need to make sure the weather will be fine.

Jul 18, 2013 21:23 Public 0710-3
George
  • Everything happens in our life more or less with luck, which even starts from the beginning of one’s a life.
  • Everything that happens in our life results more or less from luck, which even starts from the beginning of one’s a life.

Jul 9, 2013 21:26 Public 0710-2

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