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  • If everything goes well, I will leave on around 01-Jan.
  • If everything goes well, I will leave on or around 1 January.
  • 'on' and 'around' are both prepositions and can't be used together like that. Use only one of them or add the conjunction 'or'.

Mar 26, 2014 17:29 Public I have submitted my applica...
  • When I was old, I will travel around the world / When I am old, I will travel around the world / When I will being old, I will travel around the world.
  • When I was old, I would travel around the world / When I am old, I will travel around the world / I will have traveled around the world by the time I am old.

Feb 6, 2014 14:30 Public Hello, All: who can tell me...
Tom
  • Perhaps they are the very people that attract visitors, especially the skate amateurs, to the Plaze and make the place more funny.
  • Perhaps they are the very people that who attract visitors, especially the skate amateurs, to the Plaza and make the place more fun.
  • There may be some disagreement among native speakers about this, but I was always taught (in the 1950s) to use the relative pronoun "who/whom" to refer to an individual, and to use "that" to refer to inanimate objects of non-human animals. "Funny" = amusing, humorous; "fun = enjoyable, entertaining.

Jan 29, 2014 16:56 Public Although as the author ment...
geographybuff
  • Even assumming that the skiters have a negative impact on the place, the local authority can make some rules to regulate their behaviors other than ban the whole sport, which is at least a healthy sport.
  • Even assumming that the skaters have a negative impact on the place, the local authority can make some rules to regulate their behaviors, rather than completely ban the sport, which is, at least, a healthy sport.
George
  • Indeed, there may be many reasons other than the appear of skateboarding activities that may cause the place sluggish.
  • Indeed, there may be many reasons other than the appearance of skateboarding activities that may cause business at the place to become sluggish.

Jan 24, 2014 00:29 Public The author's conclusion...
moli
  • The author describes the bad influence of skateboard users to Central Plaza, showing that skateboard users have made the plaza unattractive.
  • The author describes the bad impact/influence skateboard users have on Central Plaza, showing that skateboard users have made the plaza unattractive.

Jan 23, 2014 00:45 Public The author describes the ba...
朱恩
  • However, there may be many reasons other than food shortage that may well result in the migration of a tribe.
  • However, there may be many reasons other than food shortage that may well result in the migration of a tribe.
  • Another option: "However, food shortages are only one of the reasons that a tribe might migrate."

Jan 22, 2014 13:13 Public The author's conclusion...
Jonadab
  • The argument leaves many other possible conditions that the river may occur.
  • The argument leaves many other possible conditions regarding the river that may occur.

Jan 21, 2014 00:12 Public The author's conclusion...
Toni
  • or perhaps in dry season, the rivers may continue to decline and at last dry up, allowing people to walk across it.
  • Or perhaps in the dry season the river may continue to decline and at last dry up, allowing people to walk across it.
  • "decline" is an odd choice of words here, better might be: "the river contined to dry up until its level was low enough to allow people to walk across it"

Jan 18, 2014 23:54 Public The author's conclusion...
朱恩
  • Furthermore, the author must show that the study result of the high rate of bone fractures can be soley explained as the result of osteoporosis.
  • Furthermore, the author must show that the study result of the high rate of bone fractures in the study results are attributable solely to osteoporosis.

Jan 15, 2014 11:58 Public The argument of dairy produ...

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