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The author‘s conclusion relies on the assumption that the skateboarders defin...

The author‘s conclusion relies on the assumption that the skateboarders definitely have a negative influence on the plaze. However, the...
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Jan 29, 2014 00:37
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Although as the author mentions that skateboard users leave the place lots of...

Although as the author mentions that skateboard users leave the place lots of discarded litter and defaced property, the author may fai...
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Jan 29, 2014 00:36
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The author's conclusion about banning skating will make the area a better...

The author's conclusion about banning skating will make the area a better place for residents bases on the assumption that the recent...
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Jan 27, 2014 21:33
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Perhaps the population of this area reduced due to the emigration.

Perhaps the population of this area reduced due to the emigration. Or perhaps the increase in prices or inflation undermines the citizen&...
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Jan 24, 2014 01:05
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The author's conclusion that the skateboard users have made the place una...

The author's conclusion that the skateboard users have made the place unattractive based on the assumption that the presence of the s...
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Jan 23, 2014 00:43
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The author describes the bad influence of skateboard users to Central Plaza, ...

The author describes the bad influence of skateboard users to Central Plaza, showing that skateboard users have made the plaza unattracti...
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Jan 23, 2014 00:18
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To substantiate that the Palean baskets could not reach Lithos town because t...

To substantiate that the Palean baskets could not reach Lithos town because the Paleans did not have boat at that time, the author mus...
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Jan 23, 2014 00:04
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Indeed, there are many reasons other than food shortage that may well result ...

Indeed, there are many reasons other than food shortage that may well result in the migration of a tribe, such as a poor living environme...
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Jan 22, 2014 23:50
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The author's conclusion depends on the assumption that Peleans' willi...

The author's conclusion depends on the assumption that Peleans' willingness to cross the river solely determined by whether the w...
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Jan 22, 2014 00:58
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The author fail to consider the possibility that the baskets might be able to...

The author fail to consider the possibility that the baskets might be able to arrive in LI city at the other side of the river by many ot...
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Jan 22, 2014 00:36
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Lacking these information to support the assumption, the author's argumen...

Lacking these information to support the assumption, the author's argument is dubious at least. For that matter, the people could cr...
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Jan 21, 2014 07:49
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The author's conclusion depends on the assumption that the ancient Palean...

The author's conclusion depends on the assumption that the ancient Paleans could not crosse the Brim River other than by boat. The ...
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Jan 17, 2014 00:28
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The author's clam that ancient Paleans could only across the river by boa...

The author's clam that ancient Paleans could only across the river by boat depends on the assumption that the Brim river was very dee...
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Jan 17, 2014 00:27
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The argument of dairy products may cause osteoporosis is indefensible as it s...

The argument of dairy products may cause osteoporosis is indefensible as it stands. In order to strengthen it, the author must assure me...
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Jan 15, 2014 01:09
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The author offers no evidence to show that the high rate of bone fractures ne...

The author offers no evidence to show that the high rate of bone fractures necessarily means the high rate of osteoporosis people have. ...
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Jan 14, 2014 19:19
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This argument leaves the possibility that the bone fractures are not the caus...

This argument leaves the possibility that the bone fractures are not the cause of high dairy products intake, but the cause of lacking ot...
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Jan 11, 2014 21:33
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The author’s claim depends on the assumption that substances in the dairy pro...

The author’s claim depends on the assumption that substances in the dairy products are sole ones that determine the development of the bo...
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Jan 11, 2014 21:33
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The author must demonstrate that the number of people in his study constitute...

The author must demonstrate that the number of people in his study constitutes a sufficiently large sample. It must be diversely compose...
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Jan 11, 2014 13:05
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The author must show that the people in their study constitute a sufficiently...

The author must show that the people in their study constitute a sufficiently large sample. They must be composed largely, from the young...
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Jan 10, 2014 00:27