My first video :)

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Jul 30, 2014 13:01
I finally uploaded my video about our trip to Hiroshima on my YouTube account.

My English pronunciation isn't perfect, so I put a script of the video below.
I'd be happy if you'd check it out.

Please give me some advice on my English! Thanks in advance.

http://youtu.be/-qvbcjeegJ0


English script
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Hi, everyone.
This is Miho.
This is my first time uploading a video on YouTube.
I’m going to show you some of the places I visited while I was in Hiroshima with my husband.
I have to say sorry first because my pronunciation isn’t perfect, but I’ll try my best and I’d be happy if you would give me some advice on my English.
So, let’s get started.
The first destination was Miyajima.
We had to take a ferry to get there.
This is a view from the ferry.
Here, we’re approaching the big gate of Itsukushima shrine.
There were a bunch of deer welcoming us after getting off the ferry.
Going through a walkway to shrine, we arrived in front of the big gate.
As you have noticed, this big gate stands in the sea.
It was low tide when we got there, so we were able to take great pictures closer to it.
This is how the inside of the shrine looks like.
This is where people tie their fortune slips.
And, these pictures are my favorites.
Aren’t they beautiful?
We took some breaks.
My husband had local original beer and I had this.
It was so delicious.
The filling was red bean paste.
We decided to take a ropeway to go up Mount Misen.
But, we had to walk a little bit to the ropeway station.
This is a view from the ropeway.
It was a 30 minute ride.
This is a view from the mountain.
It was really stunning.
After coming back from the mountain, we had lunch.
For dessert, I had this maccha shaved ice.
This is the picture of the big gate when tide was high.
And, this is the shrine.
Here is a deer sitting in front of an entrance of a restaurant.
The next day, we visited the Peace memorial park.
This building remains as it was when the Atomic Bomb hit Hiroshima.
I really wish for peace all over the world.
We took a short break again.
And, we had Okonomiyaki.
It’s Japanese pancake.
This is all about our trip.
Thank you for watching. I hope you enjoyed it.

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