08/05/2012 I found great friends!

I'm living at a hostel.

I have lived here for a 10 days, and I've got 3 room mates because

usually people don't stay here for long time.

Anyway, fortunately we (me, my former room mate and her friend, my room mate)

were able to meet up, and we went to a church to see Gospel show.

You could maybe say "choir" instead of "show" here.

Actually it was not exactly a "show", It was more like their weekly worship.

There were singing people and dancing people. There were such a good songs. It was a pleasant place.

You could also say "There were people singing and dancing."

(Plz tell me the an example for using the word "pleasant")

I think pleasant is right here, but often it would be used to refer to something calm and peaceful, rather than a choir or music and dancing. So perhaps a word like "great" or "amazing" would be better. ^^

I enjoyed the rhythm of the songs.

I'm not exactly sure what you mean, but I hope my correction is right!

When I couldn't understand what they are were saying talking about, I was kind of sad.

Then we went to the shopping mall, had lunch, went to China town, sat on the beach,

and went to Italy town...

As we spent the whole day together, we became closer to each other.

The three of us are the same age so we have similar interests.

Above all about love!

If you mean "The interest we share the most is love" you could say "Above all, we share interest in love!", but if you mean, It is about love when you have a friendship, you could say "Above all, knowing each other is about love!" or more simply "We're friends, so we love each other!"

It will be awesome!

If you want to say "It would be awesome" I think the sentence sounds more natural if it has an ending on it, for example "It would be awesome to go on holiday with my friends!"

08/05/2012 I found some great friends!

Your sentence is correct, but adding "some" sounds more natural/fluent. ^-^

I'm living at a hostel.ORI'm living in a hostel.

Using "in" sounds a little more natural/fluent. Prepositions are a bit difficult to distinguish. ^^

I have lived here for a 10 days, and I've got have 3 room mates because

people usually don't stay here not so for a long time.

could gather were able to meet up and we went to some a church to see a Gaspel Gospel show.

Actually it was not exactly a "show", It was more like a weekly worship.

There were singing people singing and dancing. people, There were such a good songs and it was a pleasant place.

(Plz tell Please give me the another example for using the word "pleasant")

I think a good phrase is, "The place had a great atmosphere." ^^

I enjoyed the rhythm of the songs.

I agree with emeraldgirl45's correction. ^^

When I couldn't understand what they are were saying talking about, I was kind of sad.

I agree with emeraldgirl45's correction. ^^

Then we went to the shopping mall, had lunch, went to China town, sat on the a beach,

If you take out "shopping" and just say "mall" it sounds more fluent. ^^

and went to Italy town...

I agree with emeraldgirl45's correction. ^^

While Since we spent the whole day together, we've got we became closer to each other.

I think this sounds a little more natural. ^^

The three of us are the same age so we have similar interests.

I agree with emeraldgirl45's correction. ^^

I was so glad that I finally got have girl friends who can hang out with me!

This sounds more natural/fluent. ^^