I am hungry :(

Aug 08th 2012 03:36

I want to samething to eat.
For example , Ra-men ,Ra-men and Ra-men.

I love Ra-men very much.

Ah-.....

I am so hungry!

私は何か食べ物が欲しい。
例えば、ラーメンやラーメン、そして、ラーメンなどです。

私は、ラーメンがだいすきです。

あー・・・

お腹すいた！

Thank you for your correction!

Aug 08th 2012 03:42

I want to samething to eat.
I want something to eat.

There was no need for the first "to" in the sentence, and you misspelled "something." Very good other than that though :)

Only two small errors, other than that you did very good. :)

Aug 08th 2012 03:44 しほ

Thank you!
I try to study English.

Aug 08th 2012 03:45 Jayrays

どういたしまして：）

Aug 08th 2012 04:00 しほ

お互いに頑張りましょうー

Aug 08th 2012 04:03 Jayrays

わかりません:(

Aug 08th 2012 04:14 しほ

Let's do its best　together!
でしょうか。
It may be wrong.Sorry.:(

Thank you for your correction!

Aug 08th 2012 03:43

Aug 08th 2012 03:47 しほ

Thank you!
My English is bad:(
I will study!

Aug 08th 2012 03:51 k.rma

がんばろう！

Aug 08th 2012 04:00 しほ

はい！ありがとうございます！