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Hi! I'm Yukisaq. I've just joined this SNS.
I'm university student in Japan. But I'm not good at English.
So I want to improve with using this community. I believe that thinking becomes power.
I will try as hard as possible. So please cheer me.
Though I worry that main topic of my diary become only my hobby, for instance, animation, I will try to write various things which are thinking and studying.
I try and wish my diary makes reader pleasure.
I finish to write for the present.
I try to write many times. Thank you your reading!
I'm university student in Japan. But I'm not good at English.
So I want to improve with using this community. I believe that thinking becomes power.
I will try as hard as possible. So please cheer me.
Though I worry that main topic of my diary become only my hobby, for instance, animation, I will try to write various things which are thinking and studying.
I try and wish my diary makes reader pleasure.
I finish to write for the present.
I try to write many times. Thank you your reading!
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I begin am trying to learn English!
I'm a university student in Japan.
So I want to improve with that using this community.
So please cheer me on.
Any other corrections I make would be total rewrites from what you've written there, and I don't know if it will confuse you if I make them.
I try to reduce my mistakes.
I'm a university student in Japan.
So I want to improve by using this community.
So please cheer for me.
you could also say "please cheer me on."
Though I worry that the main topic of my diary will become only my hobby (for instance, animation), I will try to write about various things that I am thinking and studying.
Not quite sure if I understood what you were trying to say in the last part
I hope my diary gives the reader pleasure.
I have finished writing for the present.
if you say "for now" instead of "for the present," it is less formal
I will try to write often.
Thank you for reading!
good luck with English! I'm cheering you on :)
I fight to reward your cheering!