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被查關於我的改正:改正方式
紅色的:需要改寫
藍色的:建議改寫
灰色的:你寫的詞不需要,所以你可以刪除這個詞

Quick reference regarding my corrections:
Red: is required edit.
Blue: recommended edit
Gray: a word that you wrote that is unnecessary and that you can omit

我之前一年半在用Lang-8。在這裡我遇見很多新的朋友。你只管加我的,我QQ(1409981553),LINE就是fujiewen1,而且微信就是fujiewen1。所以我們可以一直保持聯繫,不僅僅是在這個網站!

我也試試為我各位改寫,寫新你的全文章因為英文是我的母語。這樣我不僅修改了你寫的句子,你還會得到一篇用你的題目但是是英文思維方式來寫的文章。可能你會學到一些東西!

I have been using Lang-8 for over a year and a half now. I have met many friends here and I hope to meet many more! Feel free to add my QQ at 1409981553, LINE @fujiewen1 or WeChat @fujiewen1

I am also trying for each of my corrections to post an entire re-written essay that I would write as a native speaker. So you not only have your revised sentences but a your essay topic written by a native speaker. Maybe you'll learn something!



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4/12/2016 信 With native lang

親愛的琪庭, 現在就是我給你我寫出來的信。今天我非常忙。我有很多功課,比如明天我要複習數學期中考而且我台灣醫療護理制度的paper都交明天,所以我的壓力很大,不過老實說我真不介意因為我壓力很大的時候,我覺得我最認識讀書。我認錯我等一下我會玩電子遊戲,我在就知道這是不好...
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Apr 13, 2016 05:37
Fitz

愛信

親愛的琪挺, 你好! 今天就是禮拜四。今天我沒有課,因為我翹一節課和一個老師不在啊,所以我睡飽囉。11:30下午才起來。然後我的玉手環很快到了,我覺得我要等了兩三天受到。我很興奮。我不知道我會一直戴因為有一點麻煩。我希望有一天我們可以戴一樣的手環,表達我們在一起,表...
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Apr 1, 2016 06:38
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안녕하세요, 오늘은 내가 한국어를 배우기 시작 첫 날입니다.

안녕하세요, 오늘은 내가 한국어를 배우기 시작 첫 날입니다. 당신은 저를 배울 수 있습니다? 내 이름 Jamie. 나는 당신을 만나서 다행이야. 당신은 당신이 할 수있는, 나에게 친구를 추가? My facebook is facebook...
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Mar 22, 2016 11:09
Fitz

我要瘋了……

最近我想很多啦。我21歲了,我目前沒有找女朋友。我大三的學生。明年我很快畢業了。兩年後我要去台灣跟台灣女生嫁給我:D。然後娶一個台灣女孩 來台灣定居。 成為雙中國~~
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Feb 11, 2016 05:50
Fitz

回答朋友的新

Dear Sharpay 就是嘛,你想起來是對啦,我超喜歡凱蒂貓。我當然喜歡你的凱蒂貓的貼圖。In America we call a gift exchange activity "Secret Santa"~~~ 新年快樂喔~最近在家庭裡...
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Jan 14, 2016 12:59
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