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被查關於我的改正:改正方式
紅色的:需要改寫
藍色的:建議改寫
灰色的:你寫的詞不需要,所以你可以刪除這個詞

Quick reference regarding my corrections:
Red: is required edit.
Blue: recommended edit
Gray: a word that you wrote that is unnecessary and that you can omit

我之前一年半在用Lang-8。在這裡我遇見很多新的朋友。你只管加我的,我QQ(1409981553),LINE就是fujiewen1,而且微信就是fujiewen1。所以我們可以一直保持聯繫,不僅僅是在這個網站!

我也試試為我各位改寫,寫新你的全文章因為英文是我的母語。這樣我不僅修改了你寫的句子,你還會得到一篇用你的題目但是是英文思維方式來寫的文章。可能你會學到一些東西!

I have been using Lang-8 for over a year and a half now. I have met many friends here and I hope to meet many more! Feel free to add my QQ at 1409981553, LINE @fujiewen1 or WeChat @fujiewen1

I am also trying for each of my corrections to post an entire re-written essay that I would write as a native speaker. So you not only have your revised sentences but a your essay topic written by a native speaker. Maybe you'll learn something!



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selamat siang.

selamat siang. nama saya Jamie Fitzgerald. Senang bertemu dengan anda! saya jam puluh lewat seperempat pergi bandung, kemudian jam sembil...
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