Gender equality

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Oct 11, 2012 18:03
My friend sent me a writing to revise. The story is about "Gender equality".
This is the edited version of mine
Please help me re-check :)


One of the topics which people in Thailand have argued is "Gender equality". It was written down in the charter but has not been practical. People keep talking as if it truly exists.

Gender equality would just be an illusion. Thai society has values highly about working of women; they're not as strong as men or not able to do tough works. That's why women are very likely to be treated differently when they find a job. Also, it's happened to homosexuals. It would be better looking at their good points. Definitely, women have a sense of patient and carefulness. Everyone deserves to get equally human rights proving abillities in their own ways.
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